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The smell around Modello was like walking into a slaughter of cow meat, like a thousand butcheries. Tamir grit his teeth in anger as he clenched onto his abdominal, where Modello had stabbed him. His pale white hands were covered in blood, his own blood. "Worthless scum!" yelled Tamir, walking closer over to Modello.

Tamir walked closer and closer to Modello, but after about ten feet from where he was originally standing, Tamir saw something on the ground. Modello's caviler. His eyes widened as soon as they flip down on it. He lean down and grabbed it. "She gave you...this hat?!" he yelled in absolutely anger, but then he calmed down. "So, you truly are the same Modello Mercer she always talked about..."

Tamir continued forward, walking more in a haste. Modello pressed his right arm down against to pick himself up. He slowly got to his knees, his body shaken and weak. His head slowly tilted up to Tamir, who was right in front of him. The vampyre ceased in his footsteps when he looked upon Modello, who looked up straight at him.

The right side of Modello's face was covered in blood, which got into his eye. It made the whites in his eye appear red. Modello stared straight up at Tamir without fear, though shaking and weak. "How...do you...know...Alyssa...?" he softly mumbled.

"She was my daughter, you fool," growled Tamir. "Alyssa Terminus Thymos." Modello didn't reply to this truth, his eyes kind of got lost in the thought of a day. His vision disappeared from reality, returning to a familiar reality. His vision seemed to slowly blur until it was just black. The flames disappeared from this world, it turned into a brighter and more peaceful reality.
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In the past, young Modello wearing a white collared shirt with brown long pants with brown boots was running in the pouring rain. The rain cried down from gray Cumulonimbus clouds that seemed to cry all day. Modello panted as he ran, his feet splashing into several puddles. He passed by several buildings made of gray stone that seemed to blend in with sky.

Finally, Modello saw Alyssa's house, but something felt strange about it. Like he was able to sense something was wrong. Alyssa, wearing green female audience clothes (without the hat) sat outside on the bench beside her house's door. She held an umbrella above her head that shielded her head from the falling teardrops.

But something seemed wrong about her, her eyes were down and she just seemed sad. Her eyes seemed lost in thought. Modello rushed over to her, concerned about her. "Alyssa!" yelled Modello in the heavy rain. Alyssa heard Modello, turning her head over to where she heard him. And as soon as her eyes gazed upon the one she loved, a slight smile grew on her face.

"Modello..." she mumbled to herself. Modello rushed over to her as fast as he could. As soon as he got over to her, he knelled right in front of her. His pale blue eyes gaze upon her saddened face. Sure, she was smiling, but it just seemed like a mask to Modello. He grabbed onto her left hand with a look of concern on his face. "Are you okay?" he asked, concerned.

"Yeah, fine..." she replied, soft.

"What's the matter?"

"Nothing, it's just..." she replied, but then her voice began to crack. "My father..."

"What? Tell me."

"My father disappeared last night, without even saying goodbye...and then..." she mumbled, but then she paused for a moment. Her eyes flip away from Modello and out towards a puddle beside them. She watched the raindrops fall down from the sky. Her eyes began to water up, filling up like a flood. "I found my mother...dead..."
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Modello's eyes quickly widened. "What!!?" yelled Modello. "H-how!?"

Alyssa shook her head side-to-side. "When the guards came by..." she continued, her voice shaken. "They told me...she was poisoned..." After those words, Modello quickly wrapped his arms around her, embracing her. Alyssa broke down crying, leaning her forehead on Modello's right shoulder as she couldn't stop crying.

Modello's eyes went down, saddened by the news. "I'm so sorry..." he replied, a tear flowed down his left eye. "I'm so sorry, Alyssa..." She couldn't stop crying, she moaned and sobbed every ten seconds. "Alyssa, please..." mumbled Modello. "Stop crying..."

"What am I going to do?..." she cried.

Modello lets go of Alyssa, he looks straight at her. His eyes were watery, but he tried to stay calm and strong. Alyssa looks at Modello, her eyes red and bloodshot from crying. A stead stream of tears rushed down her cheeks.

"You're going to get through this, okay?" said Modello, rubbing his left hand across her cheeks to wipe away the tears. "I'm going to be here to support you. Even if I have to be here every second of my life, I'm going to do whatever it takes to get you through this."

She quickly drops the umbrella and swiftly wraps her arms around Modello. The rain pours down hard onto the two, but that was probably the least of their worries. "Thank you...for everything..." she mumbled to him, her eyes closed. Modello closed his eyes and wrapped his arms around her. "Anything for you..." he replied. "Alyssa..."
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19-Jul-2010 01:11:29

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Modello's vision returns to reality. The flames that roared across the night, and the man that caused the suffering of the one who he loved. Modello grit his teeth in anger and resentment. "You..." growled Modello. Modello's emerald green irises shoot up towards Tamir. His irises bled absolute anger.

Modello quickly latched his right hand around Tamir's throat, pressing incredible pressure around Tamir's airway. Tamir's eyes widen, clawing his left hand on Modello's hand. The black caviler in Tamir's hand drops. "Die for what you did to her!" roared Modello.

"Kill me if you want," said Tamir. "But Zion, you will not truly kill me. I control the gods! I WILL be back!!"

"Fool," mumbled Modello, in a more usual, emotionless voice. "It is not you that controls the gods, but the gods that control you."

"Haha!" laughed Tamir. "I defied death! I am beyond the gods!"

Modello's eyes return to an emotionless glance. "No, you are not beyond them," replied Modello, his grip on Tamir's throat lightens. "You're just a pitiful old man." He lets go completely. He throws Tamir onto the floor. Modello knelled down and grabbed onto his black caviler. He put on his head, pulling it down so if he looks straight, nobody would see his eyes.

Tamir shuffled his head left and right, confused as to why Modello spared him. Modello walked over to his dagger, about ten feet where he originally was. He kneels down, reaching into the pool of blood. He sees his reflection in the pool of blood. His face emotionless and without a soul. But his eyes bled resentment, they just bred utter hatred.

He then lets out a sigh and grabs onto the handle of his dagger, concealing it back into the sheath beside his left hip. Modello then walks passed Tamir and walks away from him. Tamir's glare followed Modello. "Why did you not kill me!?" yelled Tamir. "I made Alyssa suffer!"
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19-Jul-2010 01:15:23

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Modello froze in place after Tamir's words. "Look how pitiful you are," said Modello. "You're actually trying to provoke someone to kill you." Afterwards, Modello just continued walking, without any other sort of reply or word. Tamir just glared at him as he slowly got further and further from the vampyre.

Modello now just walked by himself, leaving behind the 'pitiful' vampyre, Tamir. His footsteps echo across the night sky. The wounds that still inflicted pain continued to follow him, bleeding and hurting as the seconds went on. Modello gazed upon his tattered left arm, the Humerus bone that stuck out like a sore thumb.

His mind, surprising empty of thought about what was just mentioned. He could only think about her, Alyssa. As his footsteps echo a solo drumline, a pair of footsteps echoed another. Modello froze in place, grabbing onto the dagger in his right hand tightly. He turns his head to the left, as the footsteps seem to be approaching him from the back towards the left.

Suddenly, popping from the pathway that way was Alena and Allister. The two looked relieved when they saw Modello. "Modello!" yelled Alena, rushing over to him. But then she sees all the wounds all over him, and takes one look at his left arm. Her footsteps freeze and her hands cover her mouth. Her eyes widened. "Modello, your arm...!"

Allister walks over to Modello and sees the battle-wounded young man. His eyes widened along with his sister's when he gazed upon his left arm. "Dear Saradomin..." he replied.

"It needn't matter," replied Modello. "I know where the others are."

"You do?" asked Allister.

"Yes, they were taken to Iericho to be executed."

Alena gulped down saliva hard. "Executed...!?"

Allister sighed. "Damn," he growled. "That means we don't have any time to waste. We must go to Iericho."
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19-Jul-2010 01:18:13 - Last edited on 25-Jul-2010 16:31:49 by Serene End

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"As you wish." After that, the three rush off towards Iericho. Their footsteps echo across the night in a chorus. But above their heads, on the rooftops, pale blue eyes watch them make their move. Richard smiled an arrogant smile. "Descendant of Zion," said Richard. "You will not escape the great Richard Narcissus!"

Modello and the other two rush as fast as they could towards the gate to the outside of their city. Hasting, faster and faster. Alena sighed, saddened by the news that they may not make it to save some of them. Allister's head turns to her. "It's okay, sis," said Allister. "We'll get there in time!"

She turns her head towards her brother. "I sure hope you're right." she replied. The three continued to rush off, through the flame cloaked city. Their footsteps echo across the city, like bullets towards a target was as fast as they were going. They hasted and rushed to the gate.

Finally, they arrived to the gate to the outside, the great plain of grass. The great plain of emerald green grass that was stained in the blood of war. But beyond this plain of grass, was the city of the full moon, Iericho. The group hasted passed the great gate of gray stone, out into the great plain, and towards the enemy city.

The city of Iericho, the city of the full moon, was their final destination.

The End of Chapter 15,
Next Chapter,
Chapter 16: Into the Enemy's Arms

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it. ^_^

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19-Jul-2010 01:20:19

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Have to love responding right after the chapter is put up. :D

See? I knew Modello was toast. I triiiiiieeeed to warn him, but nooo, he wants to go be a hero... what an idiot. >.>

So.. does Modello take Advil or something after a fight? That's twice his head has whiplashed onto stone, it can't be great for his head. And then there is him getting every bone is his body gfed... He has to be on 'roids to get up after that kind of hit. O_o

And Tamir has to be in on this too! He got somewhat gfed, and he still got back up! It's a drug conspiracy, I tell you! >.<

And then Tamir is trying to cover up his drug abusage with a plot twist, then have Modello kill him so that no one can force a confession out of him! Nice try, Tamir, but i'm onto you! -.-

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'We;re off on the road to Ler-i-co; We certainly do get a-rrrouund!" :P

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..And, say... I wonder if Vampires give blood to the Red Cross or not. :D



..Just wondering. >.>



~Seph
"How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith

19-Jul-2010 01:20:42 - Last edited on 19-Jul-2010 01:21:16 by Seph

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XD!!!!

"He has to be on 'roids to get up after that kind of hit."

What do you think he does all day when he hides in his house? Play Charades with his shadow? Think of Alyssa? Pssh, nah, he hooks himself up! And some serious strength training! Gotta get those biceps working! After all, being a sponsor of 5-Hour energy isn't the easy thing! How do you think he gets that body? P90X? Pssh, nah!

"It's a drug conspiracy, I tell you!"

Tamir: *shuffles eyes* Nuh it's not! *shuffles eyes faster* Maybe...

Police: You're under arrest!

Bad boys, bad boys. Whatcha gonna do? Whatcha gonna do when they come for yoooooooou!

... O_o ...

And no, vampires don't give blood. They drink it. o_o I think if a vampire went to Red-Cross, all of their donated blood would be gone...in minutes.

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19-Jul-2010 01:30:03 - Last edited on 19-Jul-2010 01:30:45 by Serene End

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