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Alena and Daniel chased after Allister. His eyes glared at Adrian and Tal as he tried to chase them, heading outside in the rain. "Where do you think you're going, you cowards?!" he yelled, his voice echoing across the gray sky.
Alena gazed at her brother. "Enough brother," she demanded.
Allister halted in his footsteps when he heard his sister. His indigo purple irises gaze back at her, his fury was let go and was filled with guilt and sadness. "Forgive me," he muttered. His head goes down, his eyes looking towards the floor. His grip looses, his blade dropped out of his hand. "I have failed..."
The rain poured down upon Allister's head, sliding down his face. The rain dropped down onto the kingdom of Avdima as a horror was just witnessed. The gray clouds held the sun hostage, it forced to hide behind the clouds as they cry down their sorrows.
Allister's head turns up at the sky, the bullet droplets of water smacking against his pale white skin. "I'm sorry," he apologized in his head. "Mother, father..."
The End of Chapter 5,
Next Chapter:
Chapter 6: Calamity
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
~Serene End
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Hope it wasn't a disappointment, it's like 2:17 AM my time, so I am tired but I wanted to get the new chapter up. Better late then never, I guess. o_o
Alena gazed at her brother. "Enough brother," she demanded.
Allister halted in his footsteps when he heard his sister. His indigo purple irises gaze back at her, his fury was let go and was filled with guilt and sadness. "Forgive me," he muttered. His head goes down, his eyes looking towards the floor. His grip looses, his blade dropped out of his hand. "I have failed..."
The rain poured down upon Allister's head, sliding down his face. The rain dropped down onto the kingdom of Avdima as a horror was just witnessed. The gray clouds held the sun hostage, it forced to hide behind the clouds as they cry down their sorrows.
Allister's head turns up at the sky, the bullet droplets of water smacking against his pale white skin. "I'm sorry," he apologized in his head. "Mother, father..."
The End of Chapter 5,
Next Chapter:
Chapter 6: Calamity
Thank you for reading, I appreciate it
~Serene End
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Hope it wasn't a disappointment, it's like 2:17 AM my time, so I am tired but I wanted to get the new chapter up. Better late then never, I guess. o_o
The end
is only
the beginning...
22-May-2010 07:05:32 - Last edited on 22-May-2010 07:17:11 by Serene End
*Richard and Bart are sitting in the background watching with a bowl of popcorn*
..So I don't suppose that one Knight that got binded would be taking part in the victory party that night?
My main concern is, where is the concern for health?! People get stabbed left and right- don't they risk infection? And they just patch it up and go! Why?!
And then Modello doesn't even call for a medic.. everyone calls for a medic eventually... He'll cave. >.>
~Seph "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
..So I don't suppose that one Knight that got binded would be taking part in the victory party that night?
My main concern is, where is the concern for health?! People get stabbed left and right- don't they risk infection? And they just patch it up and go! Why?!
And then Modello doesn't even call for a medic.. everyone calls for a medic eventually... He'll cave. >.>
~Seph "How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real?" -Jaden Smith
22-May-2010 14:10:58
I don't think Modello will cave, he's like a rock, just won't budge. >_>
While everybody else, I think they'll head over to Moriah for assistance. Healing powers are totally ftw.
Richard: Pfft, nobody beats my kill. I totally k0ed that guy.
Moriah: *rolls eyes* Nobody ever does in your book.
Richard: Don't be jealous, dear. But hey, it's okay - I understand your envy. EVERYBODY is jealous of me.
Moriah: *facepalm*
Everybody will report to Moriah for healing, as for Modello, if it gets infected, well too bad, moar punishment!
Tamir: Feel the wrath of my pun-ishment.
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"..So I don't suppose that one Knight that got binded would be taking part in the victory party that night?
"
Got that right.
I think Allister will unleash his fury all on his guy. Interrogate! Interrogate!
Allister: RAGEQUIT! *starts running all over the place yelling ragequit*
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"by the way what teasms you thinking of joining in triumvirate?"
Honestly, I have absolutely no idea what this "triumvirate" thing is. >.> Never really looked at it so...
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Thanks everybody for your kind words.
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While everybody else, I think they'll head over to Moriah for assistance. Healing powers are totally ftw.
Richard: Pfft, nobody beats my kill. I totally k0ed that guy.
Moriah: *rolls eyes* Nobody ever does in your book.
Richard: Don't be jealous, dear. But hey, it's okay - I understand your envy. EVERYBODY is jealous of me.
Moriah: *facepalm*
Everybody will report to Moriah for healing, as for Modello, if it gets infected, well too bad, moar punishment!
Tamir: Feel the wrath of my pun-ishment.
...
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"..So I don't suppose that one Knight that got binded would be taking part in the victory party that night?
"
Got that right.
I think Allister will unleash his fury all on his guy. Interrogate! Interrogate!
Allister: RAGEQUIT! *starts running all over the place yelling ragequit*
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"by the way what teasms you thinking of joining in triumvirate?"
Honestly, I have absolutely no idea what this "triumvirate" thing is. >.> Never really looked at it so...
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Thanks everybody for your kind words.
…,.»·•º°°º•·«.,…,.•*´¨¨†hë ènd îš ønlÿ †hè ßègïnnïng,…,„.«•*¨`*•.,..
The end
is only
the beginning...
22-May-2010 18:02:27 - Last edited on 22-May-2010 18:03:52 by Serene End
Very eerie silence over the past couple of days.
Well, maybe this'll help. New chapter. o:
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Chapter 6: Calamity
Inside the kingdom of Iericho, Adrian, the man who just assassinated the King and Queen of Avdima, stood before his master. The master peered down upon Adrian, his hands gripped onto his throne's arms. And his face still concealed by the darkness.
Adrian sighed, on his knees, he looked up at his master with displeasure. "The deed has been done," he muttered, his voice full of dislike. "I have done as asked..."
"Very good," replied the master. "I'm glad you've done the job, and quite well as it seems."
Adrian suddenly sprung to his feet. "But I didn't do it! It was you!"
"Hahaha," laughed the master. "Continue to mask yourself with alibis, it does little to help you."
"You pinned me against my will!" he yelled. "You torture us until we submit! Just like Lelia, who you kill until she submits!"
"She is different, she is not easy to break." the master continued. "Whether you like it or not, the blood is on your hands, not mine."
The rain poured upon the Avdima kingdom as slaughter and bloodshed has been left, the Queen and King the victims. As the bullet sized droplets cried down from the stone gray puffs of fluff from above, the kingdom of Avdima tries to recover from their assault.
Alena, the jet black hair princess was beside her brother, the two attempting to cope with the burden of what's left of the Kingdom of Avdima. They both were sitting down on beside their parent's corpses, their skin as white as winter. Alena's eyes filled with the tears she fought back with so much effort - but her brother had a different emotion gleaming in his eyes.
The indigo purple ocean in his eyes was a flood of fury. While his eyes were clouded with water, but his irises told another tale. Five knights equipped in steel armour with a sky blue trimming on the edges of their pauldrons and boots. They had the sign of a phoenix upon their plate armour.
Well, maybe this'll help. New chapter. o:
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Chapter 6: Calamity
Inside the kingdom of Iericho, Adrian, the man who just assassinated the King and Queen of Avdima, stood before his master. The master peered down upon Adrian, his hands gripped onto his throne's arms. And his face still concealed by the darkness.
Adrian sighed, on his knees, he looked up at his master with displeasure. "The deed has been done," he muttered, his voice full of dislike. "I have done as asked..."
"Very good," replied the master. "I'm glad you've done the job, and quite well as it seems."
Adrian suddenly sprung to his feet. "But I didn't do it! It was you!"
"Hahaha," laughed the master. "Continue to mask yourself with alibis, it does little to help you."
"You pinned me against my will!" he yelled. "You torture us until we submit! Just like Lelia, who you kill until she submits!"
"She is different, she is not easy to break." the master continued. "Whether you like it or not, the blood is on your hands, not mine."
The rain poured upon the Avdima kingdom as slaughter and bloodshed has been left, the Queen and King the victims. As the bullet sized droplets cried down from the stone gray puffs of fluff from above, the kingdom of Avdima tries to recover from their assault.
Alena, the jet black hair princess was beside her brother, the two attempting to cope with the burden of what's left of the Kingdom of Avdima. They both were sitting down on beside their parent's corpses, their skin as white as winter. Alena's eyes filled with the tears she fought back with so much effort - but her brother had a different emotion gleaming in his eyes.
The indigo purple ocean in his eyes was a flood of fury. While his eyes were clouded with water, but his irises told another tale. Five knights equipped in steel armour with a sky blue trimming on the edges of their pauldrons and boots. They had the sign of a phoenix upon their plate armour.
The end
is only
the beginning...
24-May-2010 22:44:27
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