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[#45SO12LQO]

[#45SO12LQO]

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Finished. Very well written. Bio:
Name: (Prince) Toban. He doesn't use his own title and the subject is avoided mostly.
Age: 70 (half elf so ages very slowly but slightly faster than normal elves.)
Appearance age: 20
Race: Half Elf, Half Human.
Gender (wow rs just quit it and grow up and let us say sx?): Male
Weapons/Armour: An ocean blue sword enpowered with lightening inset with a bright powerful elf crystal in a jet sheath. His armour is beaten, finely engraved and decorated elf silver. The finest material there is and a gift from the elves. He carries a crystal bow on his back and knows the elf magic of healing (which does not requre runes). He has much money used to bribe his way anywhere.
Appearance: Tall with dark untamed hair.
Personality: Has a shadowy air about himself and remains generally solemn but on occasion shall make a series of jokes. Keeps a clear head when in danger but unleashes a mad fury when in battle. Is often generally right in judgement.
Alignment: Good(?) In the employ of the Misthalian king.
History: One of noble elf kin blood he spent his early years in the elf homelands before leaving to take residence with humans and work for the employ as one of the most favoured knights of King Vulcan of Crandor his human uncle. He left Crandor after the war began as a diplomat but fell ill of favour to the king of Kandarin and fears to return to his homeland save it be attacked because of him.
Powers: Elf magic and healing
Ideas: Destroy Crandor and he would seriously own Kandarin as a furious revenge.
Do things the opposite way round so he is Misthalins enemy and is commander of troops on brimhaven.
Do NOT make him friends with Lucas. It would spoil the story.
He kills the prince and him and Justine flee to find Lucas but he dies as they both find each other to save them both.
He and the prince are friends.
He and the prince are enemys.
He is Lucas' commander and dies or he joins lucas and fights with him then dies/leaves.

24-Jun-2009 20:38:52

[#45SO12LQO]

[#45SO12LQO]

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Ideas continued...
Justine meets him after she runs away.
He meets Lucas and is on the run during the heat of battle. Could be a theif in brimhaven and raises the alarm before they attack.
He is a kandarin soldier who spares Lucas. This would make him feel more miserable and add to the plot.
He befriends Justine BUT all the time is secretly working for her father... Eventually after some time on the run her reports their location and they are arrested BUT he is not released so he makes them both escape and sacrifices himself to let her get away.

24-Jun-2009 20:44:50

[#45SO12LQO]

[#45SO12LQO]

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Woah I sound like a suicidal manic from that... Lol Maybe I don't really die and Justine is torn between us? Then I die as they escape argh! Evrything I say will make me die. What if I (searches for an option in which death is not included) aha! What if it becomes a tragedy? And Justine dies because I kill her mwuahahaha! Then book two. Or I seem once again to die as I help them escape but in book two I return as a mystery character in a hood who suddenly reveals his identity and helps them. Shows them a contact to escape w/e and lives?

24-Jun-2009 20:50:37

Crystal Smee

Crystal Smee

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Wow, Lord Toby. I really appreciate all the ideas. However, I already have a plan outlined for the rest of the story, and I really don't take bios for my stories. I prefer to create all my own characters. In my mind, you see, the entire story has already happened, and I'm just chronicling it. It's not easy to slide another character into their story. I'm really sorry that I can't take your character. It's just not the way I like to write. Again, I appreciate the support, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you.
One more week and we'll have adds, y'all. :)
- B

27-Jun-2009 04:09:06

Crystal Smee

Crystal Smee

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Ok, so I'm back, but I got sick, so I haven't done much writing, I've kind of just been moping around. I think I've hit a block. I'm working on it. The adds may be a little flat, but I'll work my way out of it. Just need a couple of days.

09-Jul-2009 02:21:56

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