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Retired Sith

Retired Sith

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Ah, hello. I hope this isn't nooby or anything, but I just wrote my first story. You're the only person in the stories forums whose stuff I've really read. Not sure if you critique, or if you critique non-horror, but if you wouldn't mind, and get the chance, could you check it out?
It's called "The Four Warriors"
Thanks a million,either way, sorry to bother.
I feel kinda nooby asking, to be honest. Hope you don't mind.
And, though I've said it before, your stories are amazing lol. Especially the resurrection of Zaros, haven't read it in atleast a month, and yet still remember it :P
General Sith, the 377th.
Former CEO of Sith Insanity, Inc.
How was I supposed to know sacrificing five interns to a flying spaghetti monster could result in being fired?

15-Nov-2008 05:52:34

A White Wolf

A White Wolf

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Well, usually I don't do story reviews, but I don't have an issue with giving it a look over and giving some general feedback though.
Is there anything specific you'd like me to focus on? Like, descriptions, grammar, plot, etc.? Or just a general lookover?

16-Nov-2008 06:53:48

A White Wolf

A White Wolf

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Heh, well, when I'm around.
Thanksgiving Break I was not online very often, and the times I was, I was not on Runescape.
So yes, while I generally do bump most days, sometimes there are stretches of time in which I don't.
If the thread falls below page 35, then it can be bumped. I just don't want to have pages of 'bump!' because it's just spam.
Thanks though. :)

01-Dec-2008 07:01:56

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