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I never got to post on the first Anthology before it reached its 2000 posts after reading many of your shorts.
Regarding "Return of Zaros", that was THE most convulsing, gross piece of literature I have EVER read to date, both on and off these forums. But nonetheless I was engrossed, indescribable work, wolf.

25-Jul-2008 03:34:15

A White Wolf

A White Wolf

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Thanks User. :-)
That's the general feeling I'm going for, with that piece anyway.
If people are just grossed out, then I've not done my job. It has to read like a veritable poetry of pain. I don't use gore to simply shock. It has a lot of power, and using it properly lends a lot of interest to an otherwise lacking story.
EDIT: And thanks a lot for the bumpage everyone. Good to know my thread is safe.

31-Jul-2008 04:41:25 - Last edited on 31-Jul-2008 04:42:43 by A White Wolf

Anonymoose7

Anonymoose7

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As members of the runescape story forums it is your duty to keep my story alive while I'm away (I go away for 2 weeks 2moz). Wolfeh, must help! And you can comment rather than just bump if you want
Quickfind codes:
Behind Dark Eyes - 49-50-302-57071649 (Not much posted)
My Fatal Error - 49-50-913-56443031 - (Compilation of shorts)
I assume this is okay as last time I asked you allowed it... I really am sorry if it's not.
And also - yes The Return of Zaros is awesomely disgusting but a fine read too.

01-Aug-2008 21:48:04 - Last edited on 01-Aug-2008 21:49:59 by Anonymoose7

A White Wolf

A White Wolf

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Hey Haru. :D
Glad to see you, and I hope the re-read is just as good as the first time.
Thanks for keeping this alive for me everyone, I know I'm hardly active. :-/
BUT, I got level 87 Runecrafting today, so that's coolies. See you all around.

08-Aug-2008 05:44:47

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'Crickets chirped in the humid night as hurried footsteps pounded across a moist dirt path. Deep in the woods north of the Seer's Village,'
Wouldn't it be Seers' or Seers Village? I may be wrong, but I just figured...
“Oh Divine Zamorak…Oh…help me…”
Spaces between the periods, and the 'Oh' should have it's 'o' lowercase. =P
“Yeh, death is.”
Wouldn't the period be a comma?
'along with a enchanted shortbow and a yew quaterstaff in carriers on his back'
Quarterstaff.
'preventing any skin’* exposure at'
Wouldn't it just be 'skin'?
Well, Wolf, despite the errors (worry not, they are of little consequence, and little in amount), Twilight's Shadow was good. You managed to put in a little suspense, and surprise, and cast off stereotypes of bounty hunters, bringing in a short girl to do it. Well done. Saying that knives 'blossomed' out of his chest and neck was a fine example of your skill, I've never heard such a description for someone with knives in their body. The rest of the detail was also great. Just as good the second time around.

08-Aug-2008 18:38:34 - Last edited on 21-Aug-2008 01:09:13 by [#9Y7BNFZMH]

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