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HempSquire

HempSquire

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just finished them all and they are great, only mistakes i saw where ones like "he quickly stopped and looks around."
thats not an actual part but the mistakes i saw where that the tenses werent the same, also one or two spelling and grammar mistakes, such as ones where you put a instead of an infront of a vowel, they are still extremely well written. i cant wait to see what our joint is gunna end up being!

14-Dec-2006 00:32:23

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