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Hello Light Lord45 and Flame Bird0! I am your first finals judge for the Noob Story Awards! Congratulations! You are currently being pitted against a total of SEVEN other Noob Stories for the title of the Best Noob Story!
First off, may I congratulate you on the longest Noob Story (content wise, as you said
) on the Story Forums! Very nice! The thread is well organized, and it appears that you two have worked very hard on the story!
This one's getting a good grade, that's for sure. I can tell by the fact that you have Duksgalore on the fan list. (And Dombattag!
Uno amigo! He shoulda told me about this!)
Plot - 19/20 Developing all the time! And a very nice one, at that!
Script - 9/10 It's unusual for a Noob Story, yes. I only know one other that uses prose writing. However, that isn't going to lower your grade at all! However, you need to make a new paragraph every time someone talks.
Characters - 8/10 You've definately done better than others on this point. You've made your noob appear smart and the sidekick is the idiotic one! Great!
Comedy - 19/20 Very nice! You had me chuckling from Day 1! I hope there's going to be a Season 5....
Originality - 9/10 Incredible originality! While some of it was unoriginal (such as the noob thinking that 25 gp is a lot of money), the rest was shockingly good.
Mechanics - 7/10 While the majority of the story has great grammar, you have misspelled some words and have some grammatical errors. ("'Hello fine chap' I said merrily." For example. You should have a comma ( , ) after the word "chap".)
Title - 10/10 Original title, original title border, etc. Need I say more?
Tilt - + 7 (I give you this tilt due to the fact that you worked so hard on it and it is enjoyed by so many.
Total - 88/100
First off, may I congratulate you on the longest Noob Story (content wise, as you said
) on the Story Forums! Very nice! The thread is well organized, and it appears that you two have worked very hard on the story!
This one's getting a good grade, that's for sure. I can tell by the fact that you have Duksgalore on the fan list. (And Dombattag!
Uno amigo! He shoulda told me about this!)
Plot - 19/20 Developing all the time! And a very nice one, at that!
Script - 9/10 It's unusual for a Noob Story, yes. I only know one other that uses prose writing. However, that isn't going to lower your grade at all! However, you need to make a new paragraph every time someone talks.
Characters - 8/10 You've definately done better than others on this point. You've made your noob appear smart and the sidekick is the idiotic one! Great!
Comedy - 19/20 Very nice! You had me chuckling from Day 1! I hope there's going to be a Season 5....
Originality - 9/10 Incredible originality! While some of it was unoriginal (such as the noob thinking that 25 gp is a lot of money), the rest was shockingly good.
Mechanics - 7/10 While the majority of the story has great grammar, you have misspelled some words and have some grammatical errors. ("'Hello fine chap' I said merrily." For example. You should have a comma ( , ) after the word "chap".)
Title - 10/10 Original title, original title border, etc. Need I say more?
Tilt - + 7 (I give you this tilt due to the fact that you worked so hard on it and it is enjoyed by so many.
Total - 88/100
19-Apr-2008 14:19:57 - Last edited on 19-Apr-2008 14:20:57 by Kingzot
Blue, you aren't a judge in the Noob Story Awards.
Nice try.
Nice try.
20-Apr-2008 16:36:35
Woo! #1 in the league of judges.
26-Apr-2008 20:00:52
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