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02-Mar-2008 15:41:52

<3333333333 OERO!@#!@#!@#!@#- finally you give him a major part!@#loved the 2 days =*! sry i havent been on to edit, been busy and was a little bored of the computer. anyway...
theres just one error. A big error. Not that i dont like being part of your story, and I hate to break it to you but im a girl, not a guy =p.No y chromosome anywhere in my cells. my name may be misleading i guess. Jay is a guys name but my name is Jaya(indian name for victory)^.^. hense the extra a in jayaster. also.. would be nice if u would stick to one name or the other =p.
All chapter 92
"Jay put his hand on his chin."-jay, his
"I am Jayaster, Oreo’s father.,"-jayaster, father
"Is there anyway we can beat Saradomin?” She asked. Jayster shook his head."-jayster, his
jay, jayaster, or jayster =p?and girl not guy=p. BUMP

02-Mar-2008 21:48:06 - Last edited on 02-Mar-2008 22:00:56 by Jayaster

Ah, I see. well this is embarrassing, now isn't it? I find myself in a strange position. I can't really change the character's gender... So I'll leave you with another option: You can continue as the male character of Oreo's father, or I can erase that, put another person in, and give you a furure part as a girl. And before correcting of your mistakes that you pointed out, I'll need an answer.
The choice is yours.
P.S. Thanks a lot Belinda.
P.S.S. Ocho I don't really understand you are trying to say... first you disagree with the flamer saying that it is against hte rules to flame, then you disagree with me saying I wasted 5 minutes of your life. Just how did I do that?
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02-Mar-2008 22:19:22 - Last edited on 02-Mar-2008 22:21:27 by FriendshipUI

<3333333 OERO!!@#!@# well, as much as i like that part,and as much as i was honored to have oreos father named after me, i would kinda like to be a girl =p. Also i thought it was painfully obvious i was a girl seeing as on every post i put "<3..oero!..." unless u wished to think of it a different way . anyway girl would be nice =)ty. BUMP

03-Mar-2008 04:07:54 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2008 04:25:08 by Jayaster

you could always put me in sometimes soon but hey, I can wait as usual. have a fantastic day!

03-Mar-2008 14:09:52

Blue, you will take Jaya's part as Oreo's father.
Jaya, I have a fantastic idea while I was at school today, concerning your new character. I think this change actually might be for the better, because it is going to help me further one of the elements of the plot. Which element is this? You'll have to wait to find out.
All I will tell you is that you will be a girl this time.
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03-Mar-2008 19:37:57

03-Mar-2008 19:38:15

Ok Jaya. You character is slightly reconized on the last post. I changed some stuff around, but I think it will work beautifully in the end.
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03-Mar-2008 19:49:05 - Last edited on 03-Mar-2008 19:49:49 by FriendshipUI

<3333333333 OERO!!!! "guide" i like guiding! awesome =p! the noob could use a guide anyway =p.Can't wait for next day!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#!@#%&^#%!$#**%^ BUMP:

03-Mar-2008 23:39:10 - Last edited on 04-Mar-2008 00:56:28 by Jayaster