allright lightlord, your long awaited review is here (didn't actually re-read the story. It's too long
. I have read the whole thing before though)
The reading ease: 3/3
The plot: 2/3 HOWEVER! I have NEVER seen such a difference in the beginning of a noob story and the end. I can see a difference in the writing AND noob's noobieness. In other words, he MATEURS. I have never seen this before so you get...
>3/3 for the plot<
overall grade (classic): 10/10 you get , 3/3 pts for humor, 3/3 pts for action, 4/4 pts for good story flow/originality/reading ease
Humor: There were parts where i was literally loling. I don't laugh out loud. I take humor internally. I like to laugh, but it takes some serious humor to make me laugh
CONGRADULATIONS!!! you made it into the hall of godly stories