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Dantalian

Dantalian

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I would like to point out that the appendix is written from Taika' point of view. Somethings in there might be speculations or incorrect beliefs ;)

And a little correction our world does not work like that -as far as we know.- Who knows what might be the case? Of course, unless someone were to figure out how to manipulate the world using that, such a thing is irrelevant, yes? "He appears in the Form of a Man with many Countenances; and he hath a Book in his right hand. His Office is to teach all Arts and Sciences unto any; and to declare the Secret Counsel of any one."

11-May-2010 01:43:10

Szarloc I

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Proulauge too the sequal of your story:RRRRRUUUUUMMMMMAAAAARR went the battle horn as eight Fremenniks entered the temple of the Pentagram here is what happened eight came only two came out then when I Szarloc the first the leader of my operation and my brother Iron Otto stabed and smashed our way too victory weilding Tok-Xil-Ak for Myself and Tzhaar-Ket-Em for Otto "we need too unlock the portal Otto now!"I scremed as a farry boat came over too the spot too take us back too Oz the city of Fremenniks of Karamja they came with cires of "come back!"and "your going too not live save your self!" however while Otto as headed back I stayed "What! where is the mortal girl i had heard about in Zaros's chamber through Guthix my protecter!"I screamed as the pentagram started too make an amutet with a pentagram on it as the decor "Men one last peice of loot we need too grab and put it into the great ark of Guthix"yes the ark stored Guthixe's robes and blood now it will store this relic too be taken too Oz schoolars find out what it is ill be back too teach our young learners in our school about Mathematics and Soical Studies and science" I explained too our scientists as I pulled a vyre corpse out of my backpack too my students."what is that critter teacher Szarloc the first?" "ah yes Jarvald that is a vyrewatch I killed while on one of my raids on Meiyrditch a walled city filled with people who live opresed lives on the Draken house" then while I was away the television and all technoigly blured out all of a sudden due too the pentagram's power then "Gah!"screamed one of our schoolars as the pentagram burned into his handwhat happened Thorvald?" "I do not know nut this burned into my hand"too be continued.......

16-May-2010 02:38:29

Dantalian

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Szarloc, I will congratulate you on writing one of the most confusing posts I have ever seen. I really can't tell what you are trying to say; you seem to switch between two coherent lines of thought at random. I will assume you actually are trying to say something, so please rephrase in a way that is easier to understand.

If you cannot do so, I may have to assume that what you have written is spam, and ask a mod to delete it. "He appears in the Form of a Man with many Countenances; and he hath a Book in his right hand. His Office is to teach all Arts and Sciences unto any; and to declare the Secret Counsel of any one."

17-May-2010 07:16:54

chrombor
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Proulauge too the sequal of your story

RRRRRUUUUUMMMMMAAAAARR went the battle horn as eight Fremenniks entered the temple of the Pentagram. Here is what happened eight came in, only two came out. Then when I, Szarloc the first the leader of my operation and my brother Iron Otto stabbed and smashed our way too victory weilding Tok-Xil-Ak for Myself and Tzhaar-Ket-Em for Otto.
"We need too unlock the portal Otto now!"I screamed as a ferry boat came over to the spot to take us back to Oz, the city of the Fremenniks of Karamja they came with cries of "come back!"and "your going too not live save your self!"


However while Otto headed back I stayed.

"What! Where is the mortal girl I had heard about in Zaros's chamber through Guthix my protector?"I screamed as the pentagram started to make an amutet with a pentagram on it as the decor.

"Men one last peice of loot we need too grab and put it into the great ark of Guthix."Yes the ark stored Guthix's robes and blood now it will store this relic to be taken to Oz scholars find out what it is I'll be back to teach our young learners in our school about Mathematics and Social Studies and Science" I explained to our scientists as I pulled a vyre corpse out of my backpack too my students.

"What is that critter teacher Szarloc the first?"

"Ah yes Jarvald that is a vyrewatch I killed while on one of my raids on Meiyrditch a walled city filled with people who live oppressed lives." then while I was away the television and all technoigly blured out all of a sudden due to the pentagram's power.

"Gah!"screamed one of our schoolars as the pentagram burned into his hand "What happened Thorvald?"
"I do not know, this burned into my hand"

to be continued.......

I tried to translate it.

02-Jul-2010 18:33:46 - Last edited on 02-Jul-2010 18:36:07 by chrombor

Dantalian

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And yet it still does not make linear sense... *sigh* probably spam, no matter, I had no intention of changing my prologue for "Weapons." "He appears in the Form of a Man with many Countenances; and he hath a Book in his right hand. His Office is to teach all Arts and Sciences unto any; and to declare the Secret Counsel of any one."

06-Jul-2010 08:29:59

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19-Aug-2010 17:03:26

Eno Remnant

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I like the appendix, can kinda make sense of that jibberish up top.

It's basically abunch of Fremmniks or whatever they're called who break into the temple of the Black Pentagram to claim some artifacts as their own. Later, the main guy is teaching a bunch of kids about the creatures of the world, and a Fremmnik mage absorbs an amulet they took from the pentagram temple.

09-Sep-2010 00:58:16 - Last edited on 09-Sep-2010 00:59:14 by Eno Remnant

Dantalian

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-.- So I was right, it does jump scenes... "He appears in the Form of a Man with many Countenances; and he hath a Book in his right hand. His Office is to teach all Arts and Sciences unto any; and to declare the Secret Counsel of any one."

10-Sep-2010 02:49:38

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