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I read up until the druid getting beheaded on your last thread until it got was eaten by page 51. Now i've read the rest and i still think it's a great plot. The only thing i see wrong with it is the way you set out the way someone talks like this:
you have it :
Where to now?" said Ezril. "I told Keril Willo and Tilus to meet us in Lumbridge, let's homeport" said Leto. Kai closed his eyes, "I...I can't get a picture of Lumbridge!" he shouted. Ezril stood up, "Something must have happened there, we have to figure out a different way, perhaps to Falador?" Leto and the others agreed and teleported right away to see what was going on.
It should be (roughly i'm not sure about actions):
Where to now?" said Ezril.
"I told Keril Willo and Tilus to meet us in Lumbridge, let's homeport" said Leto.Kai closed his eyes,
"I...I can't get a picture of Lumbridge!" he shouted. Ezril stood up,
"Something must have happened there, we have to figure out a different way, perhaps to Falador?" Leto and the others agreed and teleported right away to see what was going on.
But i don't think you feel like going through your thread changing everything so people with just have to put up :)
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04-Apr-2007 21:44:48

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i think you had another thread because i couldn't find it one day (yes i put in title right) then i saw this again :)

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04-Apr-2007 21:54:21 - Last edited on 04-Apr-2007 21:55:02 by [#H7XWS060E]

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I'll give you a list here :)

Loyal to Zaros:

**zanadra - has a batlike head
Akthanako (camel head guy)

Traitors with Zamorak:

Enakhra
Hazeel (considered a brother by Zamorak)
Lucien
Zemouregal - this guy you can't find out what he looks like. ( i don't think so anyways)

The reliable fansite i'm using says that the people in the khazari jungle are mhajarrat offspring.
And some people think that Vannaka (slayer master) is a mahjarrat.
I'll update when i can find more

04-Apr-2007 22:16:14 - Last edited on 04-Apr-2007 22:16:48 by [#H7XWS060E]

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"Move move move! Draynor!" shouted a White Knight. Ezril was pushed out of the way by a barrage of soldiers off to war. "Hey watch it!" shouted Billy, "Watch your tounge boy if you want to live!" shouted a knight back at him. Billy just mumbled from then on.
"What's going on?" said Amascus, "Why is my hometown going to war?" A White Knight stopped to talk to him, "It's because of the battle going on in Draynor, it's huge! A battalion of Black Knights! They already destroy H.A.M" "Uh oh" said Leto to herself.
"Tyler must be in on this, that dirty scum" said Kai cursing to himself. "Tyler has to be stopped at Draynor, he can't make it to Falador wall!" The group quickly made their way to Draynor.
"Ooooh, he has a Partyhat!" said a Black Knight rubbing it slightly, "So...perfect" Another one grabbed it out of his hands, "It's so much money in my, I mean, our hands!" He stealthily changed the Partyhat with a fake paper one. "What is this? This isn't a Partyhat! He stole it!"
The Black Knights started arguing amongst one another. One of them moved his blue eyes in the direction of the Partyhat, and with a small tremble said, "Precious..." The others looked at him, "Uhhh, are you alright?" said another putting his hand on the other's shoulder.
The Black Knight leaped and got the Partyhat. "It's mine!!" he shouted running away. A ranger shot him in the head and he dropped it near a pool of water. "No it's mine!" shouted the others.
Tyler had been currently hunting, only to see his whole battalion in shambles of a Partyhat. The battalion was gnawing at each other, barking mad so they could have a chance to just touch the sacred Partyhat.
"What's wrong with you all!" shouted Tyler. "Have you all gone insane!" The others looked at him, "Kill the one who tries to stop us!" shouted a Black Knight. The Wise Old Man on a hilltop smiled, "Well that was rather easy"
To Be Continued...

04-Apr-2007 23:23:30

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