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Nguy4

Nguy4

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Hi Leb =D.
Sorry about that, it seems I copied it wrong. But all is set right. =p.

Hi, and thanks there English =D.
I don't want to edit the contest entries out of its orginal format, even though I would like to do so for some, but eh.

And no, I do not have an extended story atm, altough I do have a plotline I've been thinking of for such a long time. (Fingers cross if I can write it!) But I do hope I can write one up.

And as for the guild, I would love to join, but would I have just write up an essay, as I was just gonna sumbit one of these entries for the guild.
~Follower of the Way.

26-Dec-2008 21:37:24 - Last edited on 26-Dec-2008 21:46:31 by Nguy4

Englishkid62

Englishkid62

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China town is disgusting :|
I came back and read everything except the bits where you said 'DO NOT READ'.
"The hideous monstrosity continued to squirm in it's very intricate and yet"
~I just noticed 'it's' :|
"All life once made the same illogical choice..."
~You did read Frankenstein, didn't you?
~Is it your intention, because sometimes I noticed you put your instead of 'you're'
What's next, you stupid oracles! A weapon to end all mankind?
~Mmm, *thinks to himself*
You had me thinking there, and very few stories here manage to get me to think. That's a pretty awesome achievement. I love your unique attitude to life ... but why is it so sour? Why can't you see the beauty behind the rottenness of human existence?

02-Feb-2009 20:46:27

Nguy4

Nguy4

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English no, it is not my intention, (out of habit i suppose) that I interchange your and you're. (No wonder points were deducted from structure!)
I changed the part in "Your Jeremiah!"

Anywhere else?

Thank you English, I will take that as a compliment. I really want to make people think about these different things.

Sometimes a negative aspect makes a better story/message. I write what seems good to read and inspires me. (This is indeed for the contest!) Maybe when I'm in the mood and if the concept is great, I can write some positive things =). But there are some postive sections like in "The Yesteryear of Tomorrow," "Life and Death," "Annointed One," etc. =D. And that seems like such an oxymoron O.O
(Pardon my grammar if its wrong =p.)
~Follower of the Way.

04-Feb-2009 03:21:03 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 03:36:25 by Nguy4

Nguy4

Nguy4

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Anything can fit in my style =D.

I'll be trying to read "Priceless" soon, maybe on the weekends when I have time.

I'm curious, what did you think of "Names" and "Annointed One."
Try to infer about it, but don't give it a way! I want others to figure it out =D.
(O, I also tried my hand on a longer story plot. Don't read it if you don't have the time. It's called "RuneScapeism." )
~Follower of the Way.

04-Feb-2009 15:23:13 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 15:28:00 by Nguy4

Englishkid62

Englishkid62

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I wondered what Nguy Comedy is like ... rather like Doom's?
I don't know. I'll have to re-read.
Annointed one is intriguing, reminds me of Lord of the rings a little. There's something biblical about it in which I cannot interpret...
Strange use of punctuation, especially semi-colon, if I must say :p
Names is heavily influenced by Biblical characters, and I found that using their names is quite apt. It had me thinking for a while who has done what :p
P.S. Don't worry if you don't have time :p

04-Feb-2009 17:05:12 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2009 17:05:27 by Englishkid62

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