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-~1~-
Story Contest - Themes: Semi-finals.
Semi-final challenge: A split of 600 Words; Apocalpse, A Revenant's point of view, and speech.
86 Points - Scored by Mod Craddock.

-~Names~-
Burnt ashes of the ages enveloped the lava spewed hinterland. The black snow slowly descended and screeched across the burdened hell. My abnormal pillars of putrefying corpses still laid in silent torture, and did not sway against the chilling wind.
This was my palace.
This was my home.

"Nirvana is impossible."
"No. The Kingdom is at hand, Saul."

We were born from death. We WERE death. Our souls eternally captured in this curse! This wilderness! We were bonded – bonded by our nature, the corrupted sands of times, and even our duty – our sins we have committed. We existed – THRIVED – upon the evil that erodes from this disgraced land. I and the wilderness. The wilderness and I!

"I've persecuted thousands, killed hundreds. John's your name, isn't?"
"Indeed, you even persecute me."

I am a revenant. I am a beast entangled. I am a slave to my master, tied to my transgressions.
My fate to die.

"But – but, I am dead. Do you not see these chains! It's Elijah right?"
"No, I am not Elijah. And who says you are dead? I?"

I dwell these arid lands. I pursue. I murder.
Yet death is what I am! This my fate?

"You're Jeremiah!"
A chuckle. "Go, become a new creature and be transformed by the renewing of your mind!
Maybe then you will see the sufferings of my name...
"Peace be with you Paul."

21-Aug-2008 05:09:44 - Last edited on 27-Apr-2009 02:13:59 by Nguy4

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-~2~-
Story Contest - Themes: Semi-finals.
Semi-final challenge: A split of 600 Words; Apocalpse, A Revenant's point of view, and speech.
86 Points - Scored by Mod Craddock.

-~E=mc²~-
"Nation will rise against nation, and kingdom against kingdom."


Wood. Carved out wood! An oaken shield will thwart all enemies. No, silk. Firm silk encasing, twisting around my infantry. Mayhem – entwine it shall. Long lived they be!
Idiot! Foul jester! Hundreds of mine will impale the ores. Fire. Blasted fire will roar! ENTWINE IT SHALL! Innovation. Steam rise! Bronze be smelted!
Gypsy! Poor mongrel! Peasant! You will slave over it. No. YES! Beseech me? SLAUGHTER! One, not two. Luck. Appreciate me! You filth! Iron will massacre the land.
Defy me? Revolt? Two, not ONE! No. Three! Rebel, fight against me! You will cease. You will DIE! Disgraced piece of silk. Legendary steel will cascade before me!
Revolutionary. I will spare you, disgusting trash. One is all I ask. Punish it like copper! Gleam like glass, shimmer like silver. Light as a feather. Brutal as anything else! Mithril will reign.
Diamond? Hardest metal? I do not know! I do not care! Ignorance is bliss. Bliss is savage conquest. Adamantite. The zenith!
Fool! Lie to me! Mystics and sages. Enchant! Bloodshed. Compel! Teardrop. What hypocrisy is this? Scarce ore? Berserker of Rune.

You speak of insanity. Whispers of madness! Metal from the beast of dragon? Armour from the divine? Crystal tamed? Chaotic thoughts! Crazy seers!

Impossible things will happen! Imagination will never stop! Mass-murder. Famine. Destruction. Greed! Power! Evil!

What's next, you stupid oracles! A weapon to end all mankind?

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-~3~-
Story Contest: Changes
Preliminaries - 800 Word Limit - Character Change.
91 Points - Scored by Mod Craddock.

-~In Vino Veritas~-

He stares outside his window pane.
Blurred faces singed upon his eyes; chaotic strings of an intricate mess. A loom weaves sorrowfully each unique strand - - connected, but broken.
The unfinished curtain is drawn closed.
The man takes his glass; grimly lifts it — sips it.
Sherry. Sweet, sweet sherry.



The man still is staring outside his window, his disgraceful hole that should not be called a window.
The loom needs not him anymore; his thread - - cut off.
He gives one final toast with Death.

In pace requiescat —
Fortunato.


It is the taste of Amontillado: rich, dark, and rare.
But, it is also a sherry.

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-~5~-
The Monologue of J. Alfred Prufrock

Scene: Shadow smothering world etherised, droning lull caresses regrettable nostalgia over the wasteland.
Time: not extraneous, contradictory.
Season, irrelevant: autumn.
Audience, if any (none presently), listens. Noise by mining pick in distance.
Tribulation heard every other strike, subtle humanity in other.

[Enter J. Alfred Prufrock]
Ceaseless, ephemeral fog of ash perpetually birthed midlife man, the epitome of knowledgeable age, disgraceful sin and the ambrosia of corrupt wisdom.
[Enter Audience]
Pristine, filthy snowflakes of dust gracefully blight adolescence, the embodiment of naive youthfulness, untainted innocence and the blemish of divine ignorance.

What are you doing?
Don’t you see this pile of dirt? Digging.
Have you found anything yet?
No, nothing. Nothing since I’ve started.
When did you start?
Since I was born.
[Profound silence]
Is there a point?
You do not have the right to ask that.
Everything does not have to mean anything. That boulder is not a simile. That yellow bird is not a symbol. This cavern is not an allegory. [Cue rain] And this rain means nothing! No sacred atonement, cleansing redemption or poignant rebirth. (Pause.) The Playwright does not assign meaning to it. We do.
This volcano is a metaphor and I a parody of it. I take its cynicism, I reflect it back: I dig. I have a hole that cannot be filled. The harder I – we – try to fill it, the more we dig further into the abyss. A hole that gluttonous avarice or orgastic lust can never fill. A hole that our pitiful existence can never amount to. It is a hole dug by idiots, meaning absolutely nothing.
[Curtains*
[Exit J. Alfred Prufrock]

21-Aug-2008 05:13:36 - Last edited on 24-Jun-2011 20:54:13 by Nguy4

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-~6~-
DOODLE

"Life has always been a class struggle.
The Plebians have fought the Patricians. The Slaves fought the Masters. The Peasants fought the Aristocrats. The Socalists fought the Capitalists."
"Anonymous, you have always been stupid Magi."
"Well, I was never the Wise Man."

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-~7~-

DOODLE
-~Blue~-
Chapter One:
There once was a man,
who sat on a wall.
Grim he looked
as he shook.
But,
when the night faded
and stars flew,
into the deep,
calm blue,
he still stood
as if he was wood,
forcing back the wind that blew.
I could not wonder,
why he still pondered,
upon that room.

His name was Blue.

Chapter 2:
So the howling wind called,
"Why stay? Fall! Drop on the floor.
But,
Blue still glared and
stared and
looked.
"How could I? Should I? Why? I - "
Echoes were heard
in the distance.

How could he insist
in resting now?
When he already decided
what he should finish.

Chapter 3:
It was time.

Not one cared
and shared with
Blue.
"Yet, I do not want mine!"
he said.

That green -
it looked as if it shimmered,
gleaming in light.
"Why?"

The bank was he destination
as if it was vacation.

"People," Blue exclaimed,
"please just stop."
Looks were exchanged at the sitting Blue.

Chapter 4:
The morning dew sat on Blue.
He was outside in the cold, dark blue.
Under the morning blue,
and while the wind blew,
harder towards the sitting Blue -
he got a flu, and now he looked blue;
pale as the color of the ocean's blue.
How, then, could this man be happy with blue.
Yet he smiled.
"I am Blue."

Epilogue:
Then he dropped his green,
wishing it would disappear;
reaching the ground
where it sat,
One hundred free party hats.

Then he walked.

A man then gathered the remains
and sat.

Some people just sat.

Yet, maybe,
humans,
may be like
Blue.

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DOODLE
-~The Books~-
The man walked into the dark depths of the drenching abyss; a drooping curtain of velvet shadow hung like an everlasting mist. He continued in his deep strides, under the twilight of the black, sacred night, and he pushed on as the light luminescent rays dwelt upon his rigid face.
He made his way to the white, ancient building, where the immense candle light filled the empty and barren room; shadows protruded onto the cracked streets, but quickly shrunk in quiet fear.
The man climbed up the ruined steps, entered the old church, and stood in utter amazement. He silently sat at the bruised bench, and listened.
"Father, what is the greatest of the three: faith, hope, and love?"
"Brother Nicodemus, I proclaim, the greatest of these is love."
"Father, father! What is love?"
"Fellow brother, love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres."

Hours trickled away as the few men finally finished, and they silently walked outside, where the stars hung in pure light. After this, the father gently approached the sitting man on the ruined bench.
"Ahhh. Dear old friend, it has been too long."
"Indeed, time is still cruel a thing, as it was at the dawn of time."
"Ahh, yes." The father took from his lap an extremely old book covered in black cloth, and placed it next to him. "I once remembered time..."
The man was perplexed. It was if he was blind, shrouded by the amazing mystery of that black, no, transparent shadow, that hid the book. "Your still preaching from that book of yours, old man? My, my, how INDEED you have forgotten time!"
A grin appeared from the father. "Saul, you should know by now that this is not a book, but books, old friend.

21-Aug-2008 05:16:22 - Last edited on 25-Jun-2011 02:32:17 by Nguy4

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"Fool! We're in a different era, the 9th Age! The bloody 9th age of Gielinor! Half of all the world now sees that Guthix is all pitiful lies! But YOU, you don't even believe THAT.You believe that little book wrapped in cloth!"
"And is that why your here, after all this time, to tell me this Saul?" A slight pause. "We both know what you came here for."
An uncomfortable chuckle. "More of your tall tales now, old man?"
"Tall tales, Saul? No, logic my friend. You do believe in logic, don't you?
There was a long stretching silence.
"I believe because of things, Saul, very powerful things. Logic of course is one of them, but - there's, this, something extra, that indescribable feeling; there's Him."
Saul gulped. "And do you, Malachi, believe this to be whom you speak of in your cloth?"
The father caressed the old wrinkles of the black shadow, slowly revealing the penetrating light of the books, and turned towards his old friend. "Yes Saul, I know so."
A slight hesitation. "Old man, you won't make me believe."
A smile began to appear upon father Malachi's face. "I have faith and hope."
And then the bliss of the scarlet star rose above the hills; a crease of utter, priceless, and white light shone in brilliance, piercing in defiance of what the darkness was.

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