Very interesting story, I really like the plot of your story and your main ideas. It flowed quite well and it wasn't complicated to follow.
Awesome job!
cheers
Aiv the 2nd.
Wow! 44 story posts. That's longer than any story I've ever written. I'll try to get around to reading this sometime. But regardless of whether or not I like it...that's quite an accomplishment. Have you considered writing a second story?
A sequel for this was/is in the works, but it's been regrettably delayed. Otherwise, I do possess another story floatin' around that comes in to almost 200 story posts if I remember correctly.