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As he moved closer, they moved back, until he was in the center of a small semi-circle. He came to a stop, examining his audience’s faces. Instead of the terrified expressions most of them had born not ten minutes ago, the majority of the group was now simply looking at Zach quizzically. Zach frowned. It seemed as if they hadn’t heard a word he had spoken! Then it struck him, and he mentally kicked himself.
The helmet! More specifically, the soundproof helmet. He had forgotten to take it off; all the people had seen was his mouth moving and him making flowery gestures. No wonder they looked so confused! With a hiss of escaping air the helmet came off, and an exasperated Zach proceeded to get straight to the point.
“If someone doesn’t find a way to get me back to the road in the ocean in the next 15 minuets, I’ll kill you all.”
This evoked a horrified gasp from the gathering: exactly what Zach wanted to hear. A man dressed similar to the one wizard-like fellow Zach had killed earlier on the ship was ejected from the mass, a desperate sacrifice offered to appease a tyrannical intruder.
“I…ah, I believe I might b-be able to teleport you to the road of which you sp-peak, good s-sir, using my ancient m-magicks, sir, should it p-please you, s-sir,* the trembling mage stammered, fiercely examining his feet.

12-Sep-2007 18:26:32

Narcisi

Narcisi

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“Wonderful. Begin immediately,” Zach ordered, then replaced his helmet. The HUD sprang to life once again, and through the visor he could see his ticket to the bottom of the ocean remove a staff that was slung across his back. It had a strange symbol on the peak of it: a purple circle with a lump protruding out the top, and an “X” crossing through the center. The man began waving it around and muttering inaudible incantations. Zach began to feel a little lightheaded, and he saw what might have been a hallucination of bright purple blocks surround him. He blinked, and the next thing he saw was the bottom of the ocean. Glancing to his right, he noticed that only 20-some feet away was the road he had become so familiar with. He expressed a brief sigh of relief.
"Back on track at last,” he murmured happily, and once again began following the path towards what he hoped was the end of this maniacal mission.

» End of Chapter Six «

12-Sep-2007 18:26:52 - Last edited on 12-Sep-2007 18:48:05 by Narcisi

lolanchskega

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Wha...? What happened to your story? This has really gone through a lot of editing I see!
Well, glad to see the adventure of Zack continue, in your crazy, insane world. You've really improved from the first Zack stories you wrote.

12-Sep-2007 20:32:40 - Last edited on 12-Sep-2007 22:51:08 by lolanchskega

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