Yeah, I agree Moon, but I wanted to post it and had no other decent ideas.
And thanks Charmed and Guard for the suggestion! *shyly ventures into the SD thread*
My fiance and I didn't get finished with the next chapter yesterday, (blame me, I got sleepy around 10 AM, after working from 6.45 pm til 7.15 am. I don't know WHY I'd be sleepy, but yeah.
) but I'll make sure we get it finished today or tomorrow at latest.
Hmm, I had a feeling you might be female. But that's just a question I'm beginning to ask all new SFers, so don't worry too much about it.
It's true -- that's very good writing there, although I think the 'Once released...' sentence is too long to flow well. The rest of it is pretty decent, though!
You're probably the best new author I've seen in a while...
Everything that Charmeh and Gourd said times infinity.
But li3k we could use some new writers in our little community. It's kind of dying. >_>
Anyway, the story was... beyond words. Something about the sentence structure really clicked, and... well, it's incredible.
Something about the sentence structure gets you and your fiancé put in the top ranks among authors here. Like, really.
You should come onto SD sometime. Oh, and might I suggest 'The Amethyhst Library' if you ever need some help (or feel like giving some out), or 'Stories Forum for Dummies' if you need to know anything that Jagex hasn't already covered. (It might be cheap advertising, or helping a new author on the forums; it all depends on how you look at it.
)
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Nah, not '02... '03 =P. Yeah, it's addictive, and it's like a whirlpool. But it's a good whirlpool. God, the people I've met. It's insane... Oh but a good insane.
Seriously, go there and embrace... =P. Seriously.
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