Eh, aside from the unfourtunate typing and grammar skills, it's not too bad....
One thing, the gnomes worship Guthix, so they wouldn't actually decide not to listen to him....
lol thanks for putting my bad grammatical skills in such a kind way =P
btw.....this is just the first copy once the story is done I'll copy and paste it onto a word doc and spell and grammar check it then have a better version prepared.
And the Guthix thing.......hmm I'll fix that eventually
and thanks for reading and posting your comments
your story is awful. you actually shouldn't even be alive. since reading your story and hating it, i have come to hate you as a person as well. i hope you fall into mud, you worthless, pathetic excuse for a partial human being.
Mike, you know i love you and didn't mean any of that
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