Yeah, i thought id lay off the violence for 1 chapter a bit.
Dont worry, chapter 18 and 19 come together as a 2 part bit and they are both one MASSIVE battle.
Im giving each character at least one bit of total awesome fight sceneness.
Be warned, the next 2 chapters will take ages to write, as they will both be very long. Chapter 20 will be normal chapter length.
*.K as long as it isn't going to be to overboard
with all the violence so far maybe one scene ***in up could be a love scene even though the title is runscae a WORLD at war
all caps were needed for world
Wasnt really a romantic scene, just a kind of, tamed down scene to set the mood.
The next few chapters wont be going overboard, or i hope not, but they will be at least 2 or 3 posts long.
i dont really care for spelling outside english
your right moneyme i would have guessed more people would read this story
EDIT: just abreviate my charachter name to ring
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