Roshinda, I'm here to read'n'rate. I will read your story, and I will then provide a helpful rating made to help you improve. After you've read it, check your score. If you've gotten ABOVE a 425/500, you've made it in. If below, then try harder next time!
And with that, I'm off to begin rating! Also...Referring to your first post, I'll HAVE to go hard on you, sadly. I get paid to do it