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31-Oct-2006 13:18:53
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A Selection of Shorts
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Sorry I didn't get to this yesterday like I promised, I'll start reading when I've finished the Halloween thingumwatt
Already finished the first one, wicked good Rosh! I'll be more detailed when I've finished.
EDIT: LOVED the one with Runelink! I actually laughed when I saw the end, which is REALLY hard to do with only letter
Read the one where the dude kills all the goblins. One thing: on the first post, you refer to the monster as 'he'. Shouldn't it be 'it'?
I feel like I've already read The Arena...did you use it as an assignment on the Academy once?
Read the one with Tobi and Lara. So sad in the beginning, and so...can't word it. It's awesome, all I know.
What's shocking is that I haven't found ANY typos yet!
*evil laugh* I found one! I found a typo!
The exertion has caused his...
has should be had. I'm shocked at how few typos you had, Rosh!
I liked the earlier ones more than the later ones, it's like you started concentrating more on length and lost touch of feelings, whereas the earlier ones really touched the reader.
I also think you could use commas a bit more effectively, slightly more, but it didn't take much from the read, so it's all good
All in all, some of the greatest work on the forums!
Dreaming permits each and every one of us to be quietly and safely insane every night of our lives.
William Dement, in Newsweek, 1959
Already finished the first one, wicked good Rosh! I'll be more detailed when I've finished.
EDIT: LOVED the one with Runelink! I actually laughed when I saw the end, which is REALLY hard to do with only letter
Read the one where the dude kills all the goblins. One thing: on the first post, you refer to the monster as 'he'. Shouldn't it be 'it'?
I feel like I've already read The Arena...did you use it as an assignment on the Academy once?
Read the one with Tobi and Lara. So sad in the beginning, and so...can't word it. It's awesome, all I know.
What's shocking is that I haven't found ANY typos yet!
*evil laugh* I found one! I found a typo!
The exertion has caused his...
has should be had. I'm shocked at how few typos you had, Rosh!
I liked the earlier ones more than the later ones, it's like you started concentrating more on length and lost touch of feelings, whereas the earlier ones really touched the reader.
I also think you could use commas a bit more effectively, slightly more, but it didn't take much from the read, so it's all good
All in all, some of the greatest work on the forums!
Dreaming permits each and every one of us to be quietly and safely insane every night of our lives.
William Dement, in Newsweek, 1959
01-Nov-2006 13:21:58 - Last edited on 01-Nov-2006 14:54:08 by [#80N8R0VWZ]
Cool, ty Siig
01-Nov-2006 13:23:13
Thanks so much Siig. Ya, the earlier ones were actual short stories. The later ones are assignments I did for the Academy that I posted so they don't get lost in the annals of time.
I appreciate the compliments. And where's that typo? I think I remember fixing it in the original and forgot on here.
Anyway, Thanks
I appreciate the compliments. And where's that typo? I think I remember fixing it in the original and forgot on here.
Anyway, Thanks
01-Nov-2006 23:13:43
That SINGLE typo *is frustrated over you having fewer typos than me
* is in the battle of the two Zaros priests story.
Can't quite remember where in it.
* is in the battle of the two Zaros priests story.
Can't quite remember where in it.
02-Nov-2006 12:35:02
Hey Rosh,
Sorry for not replying that much recently,been busy.
Anyways,from reading your recent stories,I have come to the conclusion you are very good at writing lol.
Ttyl,keep it up
-S-A-U-R-O-N-
Sorry for not replying that much recently,been busy.
Anyways,from reading your recent stories,I have come to the conclusion you are very good at writing lol.
Ttyl,keep it up
-S-A-U-R-O-N-
03-Nov-2006 21:38:01
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