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[#2BBJFS7A8]

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I've just re-read this, and I've noticed two inconsistancies:

1. Xavier apparently wears a White 2h Sword on duty, but D2h off duty. Noah says he never sees Xavier w/o his D2h.
2. Right after he says (or thinks, or whatever) that, Xavier takes off his sword, so TECHNICALLY, he just saw Xavier w/o his D2h.

~~~~~~~~~~~~It's the nature of the totalitarian~~~~~~~~~~~~
to pay extreme amounts of attention to small amounts of praise,
then pay small amounts of attention to large amounts of criticism.
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11-Jun-2008 10:43:24 - Last edited on 11-Jun-2008 10:43:44 by [#2BBJFS7A8]

[#2BBJFS7A8]

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Double post.

************It's the nature of the totalitarian~~~~~~~~~~~~
to pay extreme amounts of attention to small amounts of praise,
then pay small amounts of attention to large amounts of criticism.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

11-Jun-2008 10:43:33 - Last edited on 11-Jun-2008 10:44:00 by [#2BBJFS7A8]

Infinity A8

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I ADDED!! AND I'M ADDING AGAIN!!

13-Jun-2008 10:28:12

Infinity A8

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There you go peoplez, more adds!

13-Jun-2008 11:32:26

[#2BBJFS7A8]

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Did you even read my list of inconsistancies?

~~~~~~~~~~~~It's the nature of the totalitarian~~~~~~~~~~~~
to pay extreme amounts of attention to small amounts of praise,
then pay small amounts of attention to large amounts of criticism.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

14-Jun-2008 04:31:28

[#42J4VY9ZL]

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I'll start reading again on Monday. Sorry for my laziness!

14-Jun-2008 04:33:05

[#2BBJFS7A8]

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Excellent adds.
In my quick scan, I noticed that Lily watched "one of her dearest friends rush off to their death". Change it to his.

~~~~~~~~~~~~It's the nature of the totalitarian~~~~~~~~~~~~
to pay extreme amounts of attention to small amounts of praise,
then pay small amounts of attention to large amounts of criticism.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

14-Jun-2008 07:11:01