This was a great story, Poller! I mean, a bit depressing at the end but that may be what made it so good. What I mean is, although the Zaros thing I may have seen before, in another story, I certainly didn't expect him to be as "weak" as he was, which made this seem more plausible. I mean weak because he could only trap Guthix, and not kill him. And then when Guthix got out, he eventually killed Zaros, not necesarilly on his own, but that Zaros was scared that Guthix had a chance.
See, now I was expecting some hero to rise up and set the path back on the right track again, you know, the normal cliche, but this was different because the world actually died! Although you did mention a girl at then end who was the last person alive on the Earth, but she didn't realize what had happened or something. That confused me a little, but I appreciated the meaning of it.
I really didn't see any typos or anything, although I may be the next to last person in line for the reviewing grammar skill. So I give this two thumbs up!
05-Aug-2011 01:35:16
