I like this story a lot, it's very good. The one flaw I see is inaccuracy, for Zaros is not evil and Guthix would never fight if doing so endangered the world (as it certainly did). But the writing is excellent. Great job!
But you have forgotten the mightiest god--Brassica Prime!
08-Feb-2010 21:23:00
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08-Feb-2010 21:30:27
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YuBiusk Ink
Heh, thanks Yenklet. This was written well before the new information we've received on the gods (especially Zaros), so using Zaros as the bad guy wasn't particularly inappropriate.
Plus, I hate Zamorack.