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Innue

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Truly, a work of art.
I especially liked the end, where you did the 'non-cliche' thing of destroying everything.
Although, the 'Don't die' thing seemed kind of out of place.

26-Feb-2008 20:08:46

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Poller5

Posts: 11,421 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile

Hmm, with Seren? Yeah, it's not the best part of the story, but... I think it works, generally.
Thanks =)

26-Feb-2008 20:13:22 - Last edited on 27-Feb-2008 07:12:43 by Poller5

Iviker

Posts: 9,079 Rune Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile

Hey Poller, you apply for a reveiw? Well if you did not, I am in trouble.
-Reveiw by: 00 Pork for ~Ye Olde Story Guild~

Voice & Emotion: 90/100
Nice, Nice, Nice! Excellent Conversations, you might want to add a wee bit more though! Emotion, all I can say is good work.
Originality: 100/100
Completely originole, completely one of it's kind.
Description: N/100
I will filter this out as this is not what the story is focused on.
Mechanics: 100/100
No mistakes what so ever!
Characters: 100/100
Good!
Plot: 100/100
Good!
Overall: 590/600
Notes: The reason I gave such short responses was cause, I have no tips, This is a nerely perfect story! Cookies for you.

28-Feb-2008 22:06:42 - Last edited on 28-Feb-2008 22:25:28 by Iviker

Patriotic Br

Posts: 4,503 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile

Yes, I give BIG jar of cookies to Poller5 for creating this masterpiece!
I'm sorry for our previous encounter, but this is truly a splendid tale of the gods and their lores!
***** go to Poller5, for creating Ardhonmeth!
You are a Word Smith in the Ye Olde Story guild! Congratulations!

28-Feb-2008 23:08:47