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nice story right now im just into episode 3 but im just saying it's great!
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03-May-2007 22:17:40
For some reason I got inspired by on of Smeeze's stories last night (sotd3) and felt like writing
And I could!
I don't know if there are any rules against posting a short story on your own long story thread, but I'll take my chances. Enjoy if you want to, with special thanks to Ms. Smeeze
A bond that cannot be broken, by Sigurdur130.
Tami slowly walked towards the cliff face, the cool breeze keeping her hair out of her face. Her eyes watered from the constant irritation of it, even though she was used to it.
That was what to expect from living in a village on the top of a small mountain; the wind never ceased its harassment. It was much calmer now than usual, though, and Tami was thankful for that. A sudden gust at the wrong moment could easily send her soaring off the cliff face to the jagged rocks below.
Her eyes watered as she reached the cliff, only partly from the wind in her face. Sitting on the edge of it was Isaac, her father, his feet hanging over the long fall below. His eyes were staring into the distance, at the large chain of mountains a few miles from their own, as if he expected a loved one long-gone to wave to him from the summit of one of them.
She could only see the back of his head, but she knew it was him; he had longer hair than any other man in the village. He had always prided himself of that, especially when he came to the age where most of the men his age were either bald or balding. Right now it was falling down to his shoulders in three thick braids, each almost as thick as Tami’s fingers.
She sat down next to him, now two pairs of feet (dangling) over a (giant) drop. For a while they just sat there, staring into the unexplored mountains ways in front of them. Then Tami broke the silence, muttering a simple ‘hey’. It went unanswered.
She wanted to apologize, but out of shame, couldn’t bring herself to utter the words. The result was a long silence.
And I could!
I don't know if there are any rules against posting a short story on your own long story thread, but I'll take my chances. Enjoy if you want to, with special thanks to Ms. Smeeze
A bond that cannot be broken, by Sigurdur130.
Tami slowly walked towards the cliff face, the cool breeze keeping her hair out of her face. Her eyes watered from the constant irritation of it, even though she was used to it.
That was what to expect from living in a village on the top of a small mountain; the wind never ceased its harassment. It was much calmer now than usual, though, and Tami was thankful for that. A sudden gust at the wrong moment could easily send her soaring off the cliff face to the jagged rocks below.
Her eyes watered as she reached the cliff, only partly from the wind in her face. Sitting on the edge of it was Isaac, her father, his feet hanging over the long fall below. His eyes were staring into the distance, at the large chain of mountains a few miles from their own, as if he expected a loved one long-gone to wave to him from the summit of one of them.
She could only see the back of his head, but she knew it was him; he had longer hair than any other man in the village. He had always prided himself of that, especially when he came to the age where most of the men his age were either bald or balding. Right now it was falling down to his shoulders in three thick braids, each almost as thick as Tami’s fingers.
She sat down next to him, now two pairs of feet (dangling) over a (giant) drop. For a while they just sat there, staring into the unexplored mountains ways in front of them. Then Tami broke the silence, muttering a simple ‘hey’. It went unanswered.
She wanted to apologize, but out of shame, couldn’t bring herself to utter the words. The result was a long silence.
07-May-2007 14:14:05
Isaac kissed his daughter lightly on the forehead. “C’mon, let’s finish our chores before noon for once, eh?” he said as he stood up, helping Tami to do the same.
Together they walked back to the village, father and daughter hand-in-hand. A bond that cannot be broken.
End.
Hope somebody thinks it's any good. I thought it was pretty good, but it doesn't matter what I think. Hope I still have some writing talent in me
Together they walked back to the village, father and daughter hand-in-hand. A bond that cannot be broken.
End.
Hope somebody thinks it's any good. I thought it was pretty good, but it doesn't matter what I think. Hope I still have some writing talent in me
07-May-2007 14:14:52 - Last edited on 07-May-2007 14:15:43 by [#80N8R0VWZ]
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