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darkvoodoo
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darkvoodoo

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Just call me yolly like in tgp ;)

Ok so i've finished the story for now BUT there is still more to come because you still have a million of those Reserve: DO NOT POST! They go up to page 20 i think.

I really loved the story siggi, i REALLY loved it. The descriptions were awesome, the battle scenes were outstanding, at some points i couldn't visualise what was going on because it was too complicated but i applaud you. This story is by far on my list one of the bests next to a few others.

17-Oct-2006 08:36:18 - Last edited on 17-Oct-2006 08:36:31 by darkvoodoo

EldestGreen

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Allow me to eloborate on Yolly's fine points.

We want adds, you can submit peacefuly and add, or we can do this the hard way.

I control the bio shack, you're favoured realm in TGP.

The peaceful option is much better.

Adds, that is all you need. That is all we want.

Don't make things get desperate. I'm calmly making advice. There are rabid people desperate for your work. They are more dangerous.

Beware.

<~>Draken, Gold member of TGP, Silver of TWE and Novelist of TAL<~>
^><^ Before me, even Fate will Burn. The Shadow Phoenix lies deep within ^><^

17-Oct-2006 09:14:05

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You're absolutely right. Ok, I'm gonna finish this assignment for the Academy, then I'm gonna actually WRITE down what I want in this chapter. I can't seem to find good 'fine-points' kinda thing in it.

Thanks for the compliments, Yolly! ^_^ Strangely, I liked the one about not understanding all of it the best :P Yes, I know of that problem of my writing, and it's even become painfully clear after re-reading all of Eoin Colfer's books. That guy uses so basic sentance structure it's fun to read! :D ^_^ :P

17-Oct-2006 22:45:52

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