RuneScape Forum Archive | Gielinor and Darsys

Yrolg

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I look forward to reading this story, Roshinda. I'm sure it will be great. =)

02-Sep-2008 04:14:42

Roshinda

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Thank you. Just finishing up the final touches of the prologue. I should have done that first but I didn't think it would take so long.

02-Sep-2008 04:18:15

Roshinda

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Prologue is up.
And I'm out. I have to start preparing dinner for tomorrow night before I go to bed.
I hope you enjoy.

02-Sep-2008 04:29:06

97swiftarm

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was not a time to ignore that which the strange silence shouted, "Stop and be still! Stop while you can!"
That sentence is rather clumsy. It doesn't really flow. I think it's the "That which" that does it for me.
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And he jumped off the cliff, eh? A very interesting start, no doubt. I wonder what it was?
But yes, very nice start. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of this. Hopefully we get another masterpiece like Outlander, eh?
Well done, continue please!

02-Sep-2008 05:10:21