The Lauren thing was a contest story.
Night of Oblivion isn't a sequel, it's a story written by my buddy Smurf Black. Some of what's happenening to Bob can be explained by reading that.
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Perhaps you should tie the Lauren thing in Bob's story in some small way. Or at 1st have it a small way that gradual gets bigger.
And I'm used to having wierd things happening in a story and getting none to little explanation. After dedicating many months to reading the series "The Dark Tower" I got kinda used to it.
I've been thinking about it. The assassination plot to kill the king in the contest story and the jittery-ness of the King in this story that sent Bob and co. running are kinda my tie in.
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I'm trying to leave this story very open. I'm hoping to one day overtake Black Winds in number of story posts. So sometime in the future they can do cons.
I didn't plan it like that. But sure, we'll pretend they're the same person and Lauren was just in a foul mood.
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Haha, that was pretty good. Zach's duck slaughter was fun. Murder and mayhem, yeah!
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Wow, a comendy that dosn't have the word noob in it...
(Has a heart attack)
anyway, this lovely piece made me chuckle a few times, and was a good read. Do you have any other tales out as of now???
Geo-
Thanks for the compliments, and as of now, no. But I'm considering editing my first story in a trilogy I was going to write. If I did do that, it'd be about ten posts and would be a decent read.
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