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Smok Taunter

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Beleave it or not I've finsihed the story; Very nice.

At the end of 'the last post' think it said to read another story or something. Would this story be a *equal per chance?

PS I still don't get were the assination or Laurin or whomever fits in...

14-Oct-2007 23:57:38 - Last edited on 14-Oct-2007 23:57:48 by Smok Taunter

Smok Taunter

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Ah... I was wondering about that.

Perhaps you should tie the Lauren thing in Bob's story in some small way. Or at 1st have it a small way that gradual gets bigger.

And I'm used to having wierd things happening in a story and getting none to little explanation. After dedicating many months to reading the series "The Dark Tower" I got kinda used to it.

15-Oct-2007 20:42:59

Smok Taunter

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But this king Laurance probably came before the current Varrokian king... Unless... There the same person...

I dunno... Anyways, I'm off again.

Perhaps you should write a chapter on there ventures of construction ;) . Just an idear.

15-Oct-2007 21:09:06

Star Man 11

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I'm trying to leave this story very open. I'm hoping to one day overtake Black Winds in number of story posts. So sometime in the future they can do cons.
I didn't plan it like that. But sure, we'll pretend they're the same person and Lauren was just in a foul mood.
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15-Oct-2007 21:10:42

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Haha, that was pretty good. Zach's duck slaughter was fun. Murder and mayhem, yeah!
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15-Oct-2007 22:55:08

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Thanks for the compliments, and as of now, no. But I'm considering editing my first story in a trilogy I was going to write. If I did do that, it'd be about ten posts and would be a decent read.
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16-Oct-2007 02:01:50

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