Ok I've read through it all (I actually had to re-read most of it, it's been so long), and i just wanted to point out one thing
When talking about the dragonite in Chapter 3.1 "This will then be frozen until it becomes pure gas."
technically, if a liquid is cooled, it becomes a solid again. If a liquid is heated, it becomes a gas. so you may want to change that, though later it did seem like you had the right process going on but it was hard to tell.
18-Nov-2009 07:03:34
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