Wonderful story, It was so good I didn't notice gramatical errors. Could you pass on a few tips to a rookie?I'm planning on constructing a story but I almost know whatever I make it will sound stupid, I want to make something that I get more than 3 comments. In fact, Whenever I make a thread it doesn't last long.
Or maybe wonderful, divine, amazing, super, fantastic...
Not wonderful because I used that...
addicting, irrestible...
Cicobe1? Cicobo111111111111111!!!!!!
How long does it take for SOMEONE to post?
He should be back by now
04-Aug-2009 03:16:35
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