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Serene End
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Serene End

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No, no. You have no needed to apologize - kudos to you for reporting and ending it. :) In fact, I knew it was you that reported it. XD But I thank you as that situation could have turned a lot worse.

We will move on, just like we did after that mass spamming. :P

On the incredibly awkward random moment - hello Ark. ^_^ How have you been?

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25-Mar-2010 00:54:20

Ark Von Doom

Ark Von Doom

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Good :P I was just writing an eight page essay on the U.*-Mexico border and was in the neighborhood so I thought I'd drop by XD

I'm also in a Detective/Murder Mystery movie in my Broadcast Video class. I get to wear a trechcoat :D



But Lev is dead now... :( Poor fellow. Villains with parent-issues always seem to have bad luck O_o

And we got a new reader :D


p.S: I have been staying caught up with the story and comments after all. Never count me off as vanished ;)

25-Mar-2010 00:58:06 - Last edited on 25-Mar-2010 00:59:59 by Ark Von Doom

Serene End
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Serene End

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Eight page essay? Yikes. O_o Well, knowing you, you finished it with ease. o_o

Trench coat? *steals* Mine nao. =3

And Lev IS dead for a reason..

..and you may never know. >.>

P.S: Never assumed that you just disappeared. :P Ark to the rescue!

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25-Mar-2010 01:03:40 - Last edited on 25-Mar-2010 01:04:29 by Serene End

[#XJG4QTEXR]

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Oh! I see. That is stupid. The whole flame war was started by a few spelling and grammar mistakes. It is okay to use some improper grammar in stories. I noticed it myself a little to but, no one makes that big a deal of it. Not even me.

Improper grammar is actually more appropriate when a story is told in first person.

There are alot of grammar rules that no one knows or cares about. See if you can find any grammar mistakes in the next sentence.

"To who, did you give so much games to?"

or,

"You brought to much pounds in your backpack. Bring less next time."

I bet you you can't find anything wrong in there! There are more grammar mistakes than you could imagine!

26-Mar-2010 14:42:41 - Last edited on 26-Mar-2010 14:44:14 by [#XJG4QTEXR]

[#XJG4QTEXR]

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Oh! the answers to the sentences!

"To who, did you give so much games to?"

Yes, if you begin a sentence with a preposition, you must put a comma after the prepositional phrase, but you say "Whom" instead of "Who" when who is an object of preposition.

Also, you don't say "much" in that context. Much refers to a lot of something that cannot be count. If something is plural, don't say much before it, say many.

This is a corrected sentence:

"To whom, did you give so many games?"

Also, the next sentence.

"You brought to much pounds in your backpack. Bring less next time."

Once again, much is misused. It's many, not much. Also you say fewer rather than less. I don't know why; I just know. Also, catherine found another mistake. "You brought TO much pounds." It should have been too. I often make that mistake. I kinda type things the way I hear it. That is why i am insane with grammar but, I made such a stupid mistake.

26-Mar-2010 14:52:34 - Last edited on 28-Mar-2010 21:17:49 by [#XJG4QTEXR]

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