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Splendid adds, Smeeze! Splendid! Not your absolute best work, but splendid nonetheless ^_^ I especially loved that nightmare thing ;) At least I hope it's a nightmare...it's a nightmare, right?
Just one thing I noticed that really bothers me: being choked to unconsciousness doesn't leave lethargy. And also, being choked from behind with an rope-like object such as reins would cut into the windpipe, and that severely hurts. She might, probably would, have trouble swallowing and breathing afterwards. Plus, it'd hurt, even then :P
XD Sorry for my rambling. Just had to say that :P Seems so blatant to me XD
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27-Oct-2007 20:36:44

Crystal Smee

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Bond isn't dead, just unconscious. He was hallucinating.
And yeah, I probably did a bad job describing it. I didn't necessarily mean to give lethargy, I think she just felt like **** and didn't want to get conscious again...Whatever, I have absolutely no idea. I should have emphasized the pain in her throat more.

27-Oct-2007 21:20:04

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27-Oct-2007 22:55:10

Commanderjc

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Ha. Crazy ole' Bond.
Delirious people FTW! They make so many moments funny...
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28-Oct-2007 16:11:02 - Last edited on 28-Oct-2007 16:11:33 by Commanderjc

i Kelly

i Kelly

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This story is great!
I have a question however. I wish to start a story as well and I'm VERY rusty in the beginning starting a story. I don't know how to start out. I've been pondering names, places, but I just can't get a decent beginning. Can you please give me a suggestion of any sort or like, what the person could be doing, or anything. Thanks!
My PM is always on if you feel free to.
I really like this story. I will try to keep good tabs to it, it's really good!
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28-Oct-2007 19:33:50

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