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Oryps13

Oryps13

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Guard, so far I've liked what I read. I've only gotten to the end of the 1st chapter so far. I'll read the 2nd chapter at another time, around 2:00 GMT(Forum time) or later.

04-Feb-2010 00:09:58 - Last edited on 04-Feb-2010 00:11:08 by Oryps13

Oryps13

Oryps13

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Guard, I really liked your story. I believe there was an error on your 1st post of the story on the 11th or 12th Pg. I'll be reading the 2nd chapter tomorrow.

Edit: I Actually noticed an error on the 10th page, In fact there's no way I could have found in error in the STORY on the 12 PAGE, since there is no part of the story on that page.

Here's the error: (He definitely was a prison) should be (He definitely was in a prison) the missing IN might have slipped passed your mind in writing due to being a very small word.

04-Feb-2010 03:01:49 - Last edited on 07-Feb-2010 03:00:47 by Oryps13

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