I have begun the process of re-writing this entire story. There will be dramatic changes in the writing (an example can be found in the bottom two pages of page 5502 of the Story Discussions thread). I will spend much time going over each post one at a time improving them all to a point where I can find no errors, the writing flows smoothly, and everything is no longer bland.
After it is done, I will be posting a new thread to accommodate the additional space needed for longer posts.
--Guard
06-Dec-2008 21:06:19
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