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Ele Cambria
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I'm on page 10, I want so bad to read more but if I don't leave now, I'll either be late for work, or get there on time and starving. Food first, story later!

Great story so far, excellent use of description for the most part, rgh, why do I have to leave for work now? Oh wait, I remember - I have to pay the internet bill that allows me to read stuff like this to begin with. :P

24-Jan-2008 00:03:52

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*You see Charmed before a choir.

Charmed: [Whispering] Okay, go...

He waves his hands up then down.

Sopranos: Bump_____________________________________!

Basses: [In a low voice] Bump, bump, bump, bump, bump, bump, bump.

Tenors: Bu-buh!Bu-buh! Bu-bu-bu-bump!

Altos: Bump___________! Bu-bump! Bump___________!*

This has been a Charmed bump...

25-Jan-2008 20:54:05

Slay Orc 681

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Joran along with Uvedin and his crew walked up the sandy slope leading to the jungle. As Joran led the way, he noticed something that he doubted the others did. The smell of smoke.

“This way…” Joran spoke softly as he ducked low, dodging an overgrown tree with a large branch jutting out.

Joran was very careful to observe his surroundings, taking in every possible way of escape should he need to run. All around him was overgrown jungle trees, bushes, moss, and various roots. He seemed to be engulfed in a never ending sea of jade plants with no organization or function other than to hinder his chance of escape and hide any natives. He continued following his nose, closer and closer to the smoke with Uvedin and his crew tailing cautiously behind.

After continuing for almost an hour, Joran was sure he had came very close to the source of the smoke. By now, he was sure the others had noticed the smell, but it did not matter to him. All that mattered now was that he concentrated, trying to listen and watch for any signs of natives. He slowed to a stop, and everyone behind him did as well. It was unnaturally silent for almost a minute, before Joran heard something. It was like the patting of feet on rock, but it was clearly from a large distance away. As the noise slowly became louder and louder, Joran finally understood what it was. Drums.

~End of Chapter Two~

29-Jan-2008 05:00:30 - Last edited on 29-Jan-2008 05:01:06 by Slay Orc 681

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30-Jan-2008 03:06:04

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