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~The Treasure of Raduon~

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Slay Orc 681

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Uvedin awoke after several hours. Slowly, he opened his eyes, his body aching in pain from exerting so much physical and mental force. He pushed against the ground behind him with his palms as he got up. Almost immediately he noticed his weapons were missing and he clawed around his clothing desperately searching for any of them. The only result from his searching was dirt and volcanic ash.

Uvedin began to pace around the battleground, completely unscathed by the scorched bodies and mounds of human flesh in the form of his pirates and the natives. Nearby, in one of the few remaining verdant areas of the island, he noticed a rapier lying on the ground and movement. He walked over, stepping on the bodies and displaying no respect. He picked up the glistening rapier entangled in some brush and a root, when he saw movement again from what he originally thought to be body. It was one of his own, a young man with many scars and a missing eye.

The man managed to pull himself against a large palm tree next to him. He extended a stub of an arm and said in a pathetic, miserable tone, “Cap’n… Please… Help me…”

Uvedin merely stared at him in disbelief. Did one of his pirates just ask for his help? He stared back at him, and the bloody stub pointed at him. Uvedin walk closer to him, then delivered a well aimed kick with the heel of his boot into the throat of the man, crushing his windpipes against the tree.

The man clawed at his throat and made short, exasperated bursts of agony and despair as Uvedin walked away, completely ignoring him.

06-Jun-2008 21:14:49

Slay Orc 681

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High above the island, smoke was towering to the Heavens. A fishing boat several miles out saw it, and began heading towards the island to find out what was going on.

After about four hours, Uvedin noticed a ship approaching the island. He trudged out towards it, examining it from the distance. It appeared to be a fishing boat with about fifteen men aboard. “Fishermen. At least they won’t put up a fight,” Uvedin said to himself while displaying much sadism in his voice.

The ship came ever closer, and Uvedin ran back about thirty feet and picked up one of the single sided axes. He stuck it in his belt behind him, but with his large overcoat over it so anyone looking at him from behind wouldn’t notice it. After about a minute of waiting the boat had reached the shore. It was made sloppily of pine logs and was covered in barnacles as well as mold. The ship was obviously not in good care.

“G’day, sir. An’ what would you be doin’ ou’ ‘ere, in the mi’l of a cannibal infested island?” the man asked with a sarcastic tone.

“I’m a pirate captain whose crewmates were attacked by natives. We wiped ‘em out, and they wiped out my crew of over a hundred,” Uvedin said with a grin as he watched the expressions on the men’s robust, unshaven faces. Uvedin slowly reached behind him, and placed his hand firmly on the axe hilt.

The men exchanged glances of confusion and disbelief when one of them said, “A’ight, sir, we don’t be wantin’ any funny business. We’ll leave the island, and we won’t cross paths again.”

06-Jun-2008 21:26:14

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Uvedin laughed, and then said, “Actually, I’m going to commandeer your pitiful excuse for a ship."

The men clambered back on board and pulled oars and whatever else they could use as a weapon out of barrels. Uvedin just stared for a minute until one of the fishermen picked up his oar and climbed off the boat then charged at Uvedin. The man had barely made it two feet when Uvedin stepped forward with his right foot and tossed the axe with little signs of any physical exertion. The axe embedded itself in the man’s forehead with a large thud. As he collapsed blood began draining out of his head, tainting the blue color of the ocean.

The rest of the fishermen backed up to the very backside of the boat as Uvedin approached slowly while drawing his rapier.

~End of Chapter Four~

06-Jun-2008 21:26:28 - Last edited on 06-Dec-2008 05:27:47 by Slay Orc 681

Aelfsaxa

Aelfsaxa

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Great story so far, by the way. I noticed a few mistakes while reading up to chapter 3, and I'll get started on reading the rest later, but first, a short meal of pizza and Coke.

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07-Jun-2008 19:09:55 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2008 19:10:05 by Aelfsaxa

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