Plot (very important): 15/15
Character development and description: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Descriptive words and actions: 5/5
Imaginitve: 20/20
Creative: 20/20
I enjoyed to read it: 20/20
TOTAL: 100
Comments: Wow, great description. Exellent. I recomend this to anyone who likes storys they can clearly picture.
(¯`·._) Life can be a comedy or a tragedy(¯`·._)
(_-·-·~Grädêr°Of°Thé°Bøvìñê°Grädìñg°Šÿštêm~·-·_)
(_-·-·~Lêädêr°Of°Thé°Bøvìñê°Grädìñg°Šÿštêm~·-·_)
Guard, I'm really gonna be needing the characters stuff for "Your First Story". I mean, take your time, surely, but I'm wanting to finish this before Jagex updates the forums with a massive update.
Alright, I'm going to be gone for about four or five days on a vacation. If people will keep this bumped, I would VERY much appreciate it.
Capt - If my laptop isn't being funky up there (I've tried to shut it down so I can bring it up there, and it's spent the last three hours on 'Logging Off...'), I will probably be done with the lessons for YFS.
Alright, but I'm really wanting to finish this by next week. I want it to be finished for Craddock when he checks it out, or, at least, near completion.