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Aelfsaxa

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I give it a rating of 0/10. It's awful!

Just kidding, around an 8.5/10 would do. Almost flawless, but the plot and general flow is sometimes a bit jumpy and I find a couple of weird sentences that look wrong, but probably aren't.

You also have a few semi-wall of texts. They're not quite large enough to constitute a Wall-o'-Text, but still too large for a single paragraph.

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07-Jun-2008 20:33:57 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2008 20:34:11 by Aelfsaxa

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Yeah. 8-8.5/10 for me, Guardeh.

07-Jun-2008 20:35:07

Artanis_gunz

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hello

can i post here?

07-Jun-2008 20:36:53

Slay Orc 681

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Of course!

*Whispers* By the way, Dragon 3011 and Smurf Black are Narbs. But don't tell them I said that!

--Guard

07-Jun-2008 20:37:54 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2008 20:40:57 by Slay Orc 681

NovelistElly

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hello

add me pls, still reading the story, a bit lost, may have missed a few (a lot) of pages but whatever, still very entertaining story, I really should have you check the comedy i have half written, and will be finishing 6 months after I started, actually, better to just rewrite the whole thing...as I remember now it was not very impressive

07-Jun-2008 23:40:04 - Last edited on 07-Jun-2008 23:41:16 by NovelistElly