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Azigarath

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Hey. Good job on getting this stickied, and congrats on winning the previous contest.
I read the new additions. Not much to say, the story is unfolding. But there's something wrong with the arrow skewering a man's neck and then splashing blood, because when the neck is pierced, very little blood actually appears (because of the oxygen in the throat). But oh well.
Hopefully you'll get more readers now that this is a sticky.

12-Jun-2012 00:45:53

Areno3

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@ Azi: But the arrow *skewered* the throat, so it went in one side and came out the other, so the whole of the shaft is within his throat. I'm pretty sure a decent amount of blood would squirt out.
Thanks for the compliments Snow and Yam. :) I appreciate it.

13-Jun-2012 03:25:51 - Last edited on 13-Jun-2012 03:26:25 by Areno3

Beep282

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Wow. Beautiful writing so far! I have read it over the past few days ( I have been in Eugene watching the Olympic Trials as of recently, so not much time for writing and such, hence the abnormally long time taken to read) and I really enjoyed it. Congrats on the sticky, and keep it up. :)

24-Jun-2012 06:15:17

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