RuneScape Forum Archive | Mitch's Short Collection

Venmi

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So I have almost every credential I have ever earned since being part of these forums on post one. Yes, the list is quite long, and it brings back some insane memories. I miss a lot of people who were a part of those guilds.

~Mitch

15-Oct-2011 05:45:37

Borna Coric

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I wish I was a more active community member back then. I didn't really associate with anyone. That's an impressive list, though.

Just a casual bump.

22-Oct-2011 14:14:17

Venmi

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I think it's quite impressive, too. I definitely miss that as well. It went by too quickly.

~Mitch

30-Oct-2011 19:27:40

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VonDerThWood

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Grammar/Spelling: 18/20. I think I noticed a few things here and there, but nothing too major obviously.

Plot: 35/40. Not truly sure how to explain my reasoning here, so I'll let your imagination stew.

Character development: 30/40. I may be too harsh here, as this IS a short story and all, but the character of the
knight was difficult to connect with for me. But perhaps I'm just socially awkward.

The Hook: 8/10. I was hooked a little deeper into the story than may be good for it, but oh well.

Sensual feeling: 7/10. Something was missing, though I'm not quite sure what.

Overall enjoyment and misc': 48/60. Difficult to explain here.

Special something: 14/20.

TOTAL: 160/200. 80%. 'Twas interesting, thought-out and et cetera. But you and I both know I'm just boring you here. I liked it, Mitch. Death to the greedy ones! #OccupyVarrock

31-Jan-2012 09:01:05