I wrote these while I was still over in Manchester on Study Abroad. Don't know if they're much if any good, but here's hoping. I'm open to comments of all kinds, just tell me honestly.
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- At Last -
The drinks are gone; the shine
shows in our eyes, we settle
into the sheets and bed
and lie back
against the wall.
In the silent half-light there is a moment
when it happens.
You startle
like a crow in the trees, eyes
wary-wide alert, then closed.
What you have waited for
at last, given in one moment,
one breath, movement; something soft-
sweet-gentle that you never once
imagined I could give.
What did you think?
That it was the drink,
or the late hour, some haze
clouding my mind? Or perhaps
some latent hope, some fragment
buried from the first, uncovered
and exposed.
Whatever you thought
—it was done—
and you yielded
at last, at longest last.
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- I Know -
where you are. As if I were in your head as if I were you
as if in some half-thought-of moment I'd taken on your form
and grasped, for a moment, what it was
to know your flesh, and the touch of your fingers
as they moved over themselves.
what you are doing. As if I were there in that darkness
with all the little lights around, full of sweat
and the noise of gasps. As if I were him
as if I were the room itself as it watched
as if I were the air.
what you feel. As if I could wrap your nerves around mine
and let their sparking currents flow to me instead, as if
you were suddenly me and you could sense—
25-May-2012 03:16:54