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Elite, school has kept me busy with a story to write (ugh) so I will not be able to add for a while.

14-Apr-2010 03:05:22

Elitemage14

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School's been keeping me pretty busy for the past few days, too

14-Apr-2010 21:15:40 - Last edited on 15-Apr-2010 21:16:03 by Elitemage14

FrumpusNump

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Great adds but i did notice one small mistake. When Leon is talking about everybody else he says that he saw them "in restaurant" shouldn't there be the word the in there?

17-Apr-2010 01:24:56

Kilner66

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Cool story Elite

20-Apr-2010 03:00:42

Elitemage14

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Thanks. Bump.

21-Apr-2010 21:39:23

Elitemage14

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Up

22-Apr-2010 21:10:28

Elitemage14

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I really need to write some more soon.

25-Apr-2010 17:45:52

Amoraten

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^^ yes I will look forward to it Elite

I really enjoyed reading all the other chapters

Been a while since I last read

I really like this concept and how the story is shaping together

(sorry I have been tied up forum time with the Event Community- slaps wrist but back to normal reading time now)

26-Apr-2010 01:20:58

Elitemage14

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Thanks Amora. Finally I have a reader!

To anyone who ever read my other stories In Bad Company and Caught in the Crossfire, you're in luck, because Kane Ashcraft and Colonel August will be making an appearance before too long.

26-Apr-2010 01:45:10

Amoraten

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I wish I had enough time to read all of the stories here- your story stands out for originality

And keeps me thinking "I can't wait to see what happens next"

26-Apr-2010 01:53:36

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