Jac, it sounds like there is all lot of opinions and personal experiences in that rough draft. I think you should keep it more professional and explain what makes a shorty a shorty, the do's and don't's, how imagery, description, and twists affect it, etc, etc.
This, of course, is my opinion (kinda ironic if you think about it) and its really up to Capt and Pol as to how the article should be written.
17-Aug-2008 06:37:57