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Howdy! I'm just checking in to see if this is okay for the first paragraph of my first ever horror short.
Hazel hurried through the strangely designed maze of bones somehow knotted together with muscle. Bits of tendons and ligaments scattered the floor and walls. Even whole limbs seemed to protrude from various parts of the maze as if whole bodies had been crammed within. Hazel carried on running, face pale and blood arcing from the back of her head sickeningly as she continued to hunt for an exit from the terrifying world of pain and suffering.

14-Jul-2008 20:45:14 - Last edited on 14-Jul-2008 20:45:47 by Anonymoose7

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