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So, Capt, if the TOC says that a certain topic is supposed to be on a certain post, and we don't find it there, does that mean it needs to be written? There isn't any list of topics to be covered; otherwise, I could post/write something. :P

29-Jun-2008 03:48:39

Saker112

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A good guide, but I found at least one mistake. In the horror section, Whitewolf492 said:
"Blood dripping out of his exposed liver and intestines, Keith screamed loudly as the zombie pulled out organs and ate them, chewing on his intestines like they were some kind of meat pasta."
It gets comical. I've seen passages written every bit as ineptly as that one, probably more so (though I have to say, I really like that metaphor about the intestines. *keeps*).
When talking in parentheses, he's refering to the section after the last comma in the excerpt, however he calls is a metaphor, and I belive that it is actually a simile, due to the fact that he uses the word like.

I'll be on the look out for more errors. Time to check the grammer section. :P

29-Jun-2008 17:37:54 - Last edited on 29-Jun-2008 17:43:32 by Saker112

CaptChekaka

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Just so everyone knows, I am still planning on finishing this. It will not die off like any other project. I'm set to do this thing, and I'll do it if it kills me.
I'll be contacting people who need to help me out with their stuff soon.
~` Admiral Chek `~

02-Jul-2008 05:13:16

CaptChekaka

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Alright. I'm listing everything that is finished and everything that still needs to be completed:
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Finished:
Introduction
Table of Contents
Thread News and Questioning Arena
The Contributors (May receive updates.)
Prose Stories – The Basics
Noob Stories – The Basics
True Stories – The Basics
Reviewers – The Basics
Good Threads To Visit
Plot - An Overview
Plot - Twists
Characters - An Overview
Characters - Emotions
Description – An Overview
Description – Characters
Description – Surroundings
Description - Mood
Flow
Mechanics - Grammar
Mechanics - Vocabulary
Prose Comedy – An Overview
Prose Comedy
The World – Overview
Manipulating the World
Tragedy
Romance
Horror
Guilds

Uncompleted:
Plot - Scene Changes
Plot - Flashbacks
Plot - Other
Plot - Structure
Plot FAQ
Characters – Protagonist
Characters – Antagonist
Characters – Supporting
Characters – Other
Characters FAQ
Description FAQ
Flow FAQ
Mechanics - Spelling
Mechanics FAQ
Scripted Comedy - An Overview
Scripted Comedy
Scripted Comedy FAQ
Originality
Originality FAQ
Poetry - An Overview
Poetry
Poetry FAQ
Guilds – An Overview
Guilds FAQ
Contests – An Overview
Contests
Contests FAQ
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I'm going to be contacting anyone that has not submitted something they said they would yet.
Since there is a lack of people for Description, Spelling Mechanics, and Originality, I will do those. People associated with certain sections now are:
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Plot - Poller
Characters - Guard
Mechanics [Spelling] - Capt
Scripted Comedy - Capt
Originality - Capt
Poetry - Torpeh's Guide
Contests - Mitch
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The names above are subject to change.
For each FAQ - They will be completed by Poller and myself once the submissions are complete.
Thanks.
~` Admiral Chek `~

02-Jul-2008 05:23:21 - Last edited on 03-Jul-2008 16:03:34 by CaptChekaka

Bioniclenoob

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I will say this is a usefull guide! It's helped me looked deeper into my writing. Thanks for making this!
(¯¤_)Bioniclenoob(¯¤_)
(¯¤_)Making a beast out of myself, never to return(¯¤_)

02-Jul-2008 19:32:17 - Last edited on 02-Jul-2008 19:38:06 by Bioniclenoob

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