“Headmaster Evil Jagex Mod: Umlets see...uh a candlestick holder.”
“Headmaster Evil Jagex Mod: None of thesecreaturescome with flowers!”
Shouldn’t the words here be separated? Or did you do it on purpose?
“Elite Noob: Weve been heard of before?”
Missing an ‘
Title: A nice title for a good story and for the genre I think it’s safe to say it’s pretty original and not overly used (i.e. Noob Story or Noob Storys).
Other: I have no furthure complaints at this point or things to say. Though I hope you get that Birthday special posted soon.
Score: I’m happy to award you a 9/10. It was a good story although your grammar and spelling dropped your score some.
12-Apr-2008 20:00:55
