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Scoucher

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I'm sorry Lance, but I'm not going to give you a full review on your story. It's nothing against your particular story, but I have trouble reading scripted stories. I'm not able to stay interested in them.
I did read the first several chapters, and they were pretty good. Some of your jokes were funny (especially compared to SOME "noob" stories), and it wasn't nearly as random as "noob" stories can be. (I didn't laugh out loud, but then again I've never literally laughed at any story on these forums.) You also had great grammar. This is very good because the vast majority of noob stories do not. I did not see a plot, but then again I only read a small percentage, and it's a noob story after all.
I think this is great for a "noob" story!
(note: I've never managed to fully read any "noob" story. Maybe, just maybe, yours will be the first.)
-scouch
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28-Oct-2007 01:15:38

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Fine...
O_o ~Iso the Galantous Blob, now a Potato Sack!~Dubbed a nub by Zappo, WKC, Star, Snake, Die, Pat, Orby, DieS, Dudely, Scout, Bed, Haru, Siggi, Tet, Scouh~Basic Signatures for 55 days~Capt!

28-Oct-2007 02:14:01 - Last edited on 28-Oct-2007 02:14:18 by [#DTGU0KGCF]

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Yes, but I still have a few space-saving ideas :P .
Lance- b3tt3r 7h4n ur5!
O_o ~Iso the Galantous Blob, now a Potato Sack!~Dubbed a nub by Zappo, WKC, Star, Snake, Die, Pat, Orby, DieS, Dudely, Scout, Bed, Haru, Siggi, Tet, Scouh~Basic Signatures for 55 days~Capt!

28-Oct-2007 04:14:16

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