awsome story! i no how u feel about football, im on my middle scool's team. and these people saying bad things about your story? forget them. just because a story doesn't have grammar doesn't make it bad. i think it was REALLY FUNNY. ill admit im a nerd, (and on the FOOTBALL TEAM?!) but i at least dont waste my life giving comment about other peoples stories. OH NO! IM DOING IT NOW! 11/10 for your story, you ten year old genius.
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