dude, nobody cares about grammar, spelling, or script format. they just like the way the story is humorous
Roses are grey, violets are grey, I'm in Pompeii, I'm lost.
:/, just to keep this thread alive, a comic.
~~~~~^~~~~part:wutever~~~~^~~~~~
Ahrim now off the walls
Ahrim:i'm bored.
Karil:then let's put tnt in the neighbor's mailbox, and blow it up.
All bros but Karil: OMG! KARIL'S NOT THINKING OF DYNAMITE! IS THE WORLD COMING TO AN END???
Karil:NO!
bros:...
Verac:meh. :/
Ahrim:lets pitch in some choices.
Verac:let's start a cookie making buisness!
Torag: pfft XD that's your choice! my choice is make a RESTARAUNT!
Guthan:actually, i think we're gonna start a hat making buisness.
Dharok:aouwgh! gym!
Ahrim:umm... Dharok, you're not ahnuld.
Dharok:i know. i was jking. how about pking?
Ahrim:nah, we didn't get a good drop last time :/
Karil:LETS JOIN THE MILITARY!
Ahrim:hmm... im in the mood for runecrafting
Bystander:why not make gigantic candles like last time?
Verac:umm... who are you? and what're you talking about?
Bystander:remember thouse gigantic candles you guys made?
Ahrim:no...
Karil:wait! you mean thouse huge explosions?
Bystander:no?
Guthan:umm...i'm pretty sure thouse wern't huge crap candles.
Bystander:yeah they were! i saw them! they kept following me!
Torag:actually- wait, they kept following you?
Dharok:Torag, don't get worked up. it's coincidence.
Bystander:it's not coincidence!
Bros:-.-
Bros beat bystander up
Ahrim:now that that's outta the way...
Shone:how about TD's?
Bros:Shone!
Ahrim:we thought you became crap-literally!
Shone:nah, i was ressurected.
Dharok: party?
Giant hot dog falls from the sky and hits their house
all:wtf...
director:that's not in the script bros! you were supposed to say vacation!
cb138:>:[
director: o gaw-
cb138 kills director before he finished his word
Shone:that's better
Roses are grey, violets are grey, I'm in Pompeii, I'm lost.
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Jimothey
~~~~~^~~~~Part:...~~~~^~~~~~
bros repairing house from falling giant hot gog
Ahrim:at least Torag's doing at least SOMETHING.
Torag eating hot dog from hot dog incident
Torag: omnomnom...
Karil:it would've been easier if we burnt the hot dog into crap.
Torag: omn-wait, don't burn the hot dog!
Karil:why not?
Torag:because then i would'nt be eating it! remember the pie contest?
Verac:i think one of the pies was a cookie pie...
Guthan:ugh... none of them were cookie pies, they were HAT pies.
Dharok: uhh... Guthan, people can't make pies with hats. that would make them taste crappy
...
Ahrim:i remember it! man, torag ate all thouse pies in a few seconds, but it ended having a smell
...
Verac: oh yeah! that smell was Torag's-
All but Verac: DON'T TALK ABOUT WHAT TORAG DID!
Verac: OK, fine. geez...
a god:COME SEE WHAT THE F***ING FUTURE IS LIKE!
Bros:wt*...
to be continued
Roses are grey, violets are grey, I'm in Pompeii, I'm lost.
James, contrary to popular belief, people DO care about spelling and grammar. And secondly, how do people find it funny? Its just so stupid, you can't follow it, and the jokes sound like they were made by a 3-year old.
And you're story is even worse! your abbreviations make the story so bad, I literally cannot stand to read it.
one more, since sims thinks this comic is so g**, that he wants it off da forums for good.
-~~~~-chapter:da future-~~~~-
???:SEE? THIS FUTURE IS ****ED UP WITHOUT U GUYS!
Ahrim:why, did we die?
???:no, this is 5 weeks into the future. you guys moved to a different planet.
Guthan:how the **** did we go to a different planet?
???:i dunno, u tell me.
Karil:*whistle* <_< >_>
Ahrim:Karil, did u have something to do with this?
Karil:NO! maybe... ok fine yes! i planned us to move away from runescape to another planet.
Verac:how the **** would we be able to go to a different planet?
Karil:brainwashing. see, ahrim's 99 magic right?
Guthan:yeah...
Karil:so, i decided to make a potion to make him my slave.
Dharok:why?
Karil:to tell you guys that we were moving to another planet without suspicion, since Ahrim's the smart one.
???:and now take a look at the future.
Bystaner:WHERE THE HELL ARE THE GIGANTIC CANDLES?!?
mark (a random person i made up):GKHDZDKSDALOCDSKLDCFNL!!%@%~MKJSFFTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mark gets killed by a lunatic named blink (yeah, blink's insane and hes from dungeoneering.)
Blink: CA-CANT CATCH ME! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
bros:
???:SEE???
Karil:yeah, it is ****ed up.
Ahrim:lets fix this.
Verac:how?
Ahrim:im 99 mage and 99 herblore.i can use a potion to get 120/99 magic, and group teleport us ... uh when did we move?
???:4 weeks from now.
Ahrim: ok, then 4 weeks from this time.Ready?
Bros:Ready.
Ahrim teleports them to 4 weeks from time period
-TO BE CONTINUED-
PS jagex, i used Blink cuz he IS a lunatic.
Roses are grey, violets are grey, I'm in Pompeii, I'm lost.
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Jimothey