nice chapter mbts(c)t good Detail! Seren reminds me of a certain elf out of a book. I don't know how she reminds she just acts like someone i have read about before. But enough of that can't wait for next chapter keep up the good work!
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Don't be rude. Comments like that are upsetting to people. If you don't support this thread, and don't wish to be involved in the story, I strongly suggest not posting here.
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Dragonlor59, please respect the fact that I have a life, and can't type everyday. I, and all the other story forum writers, are like authors who don't get paid. We choose to write for your entertainment, so don't yell at me to type.
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